Wednesday, 17 December 2025

#154 Riz-mas Guide + Short Diversions: Phantom Dawn Chapter 21

Happy Blog Day Everyone

Got a new chapter of Phantom Dawn for all your reading pleasures, and it'll all be over soon, though I have slightly missed the time it was supposed to end in. If I recall, my original plan called for it to have either ended now, or before the end of December. Might have been earlier come to think of it. It'll definitely have ended before the end of January...Maybe, never say never and all that!

In other news, work continues apace on my new Daemon Soul novella, hoping to have something to show you all soon regarding it.  Ideally, I'd have thought this up sooner but that's the writers luck I guess.

Let's see what mischief Riz is up too this Riz-mas season...

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz



Seems Riz has issued a guide for those still unsure of how to usher in a good Riz-mas. I fear though that his holiday isn't going to get much traction. Can't blame a rat for trying!

Short Diversions: Phantom Dawn Chapter 21

With two surprising new allies on her side, Rose enters the fray again, but is it enough to ensure victory? Or is she going to have to dig deeper than she even thought possible? Read on to find out!

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Chapter 21

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Chapter 21: Berserker

     Rose stood in the middle of the T-Rex and spider-like creatures, while their enemy, the humanoid shaped one, didn’t seem phased by the numbers against it. It started advancing towards this strange team, its pace quickening till it was flat out running, and with its speed, it was in their midst before they knew it. The T-rex creature charged in, using its head to charge the opposing monster, but the humanoid creature stood its ground, and lifted its opponent off the ground, throwing it to the side, just as the spider creature attacked, its large legs falling hard on the humanoid creature's shoulders. The attack landed but it was nowhere near enough to stop it. Instead, the humanoid creature lifted the spider’s arms out of its way, before attacking it with its tail that had quickly changed shape, resembling more of an axe head than before. The area became filled with the sound of the monsters crying out in pain as each one scored a hit on the other. 
     Unable to do anything, Rose kept calling out to the monsters on her side, telling them where there were openings in their enemies' defence. To her surprise, they actually listened to her, moving as instructed. Still, for every attack they landed, more was inflicted in return. This kind of fighting wasn’t sustainable, and Rose could see that. Sooner, rather than later, her allies would slow, and then, they would fall. It was only the fact that it was currently two versus one that they were doing the damage. Feeling her own self-worth lessen, she gripped the handle of her sword tightly. For the first time, she felt the damage that her fighting had caused the sword, as the handle was scratched where once it was smooth, the blade itself was now chipped in a couple of places, showing how hard the enemy’s defences were. If she were to swing again, there was no telling how long it’d last before the blade snapped. The T-rex creature cried out in pain as the tail from the humanoid one struck near its neck, drawing blood.
Gritting her teeth, Rose charged in, wanting to take her chances rather than standing there. The Spider creature blocked her path, stopping her from joining the fray as it grabbed the tail that was hurting its comrade and ripped it off, allowing the T-rex to stagger to the side, blood oozing out from the wound. It was able to stand again, baring its teeth at the humanoid creature, yet the threat was no longer there.
     The three creatures clashed again in combat, leaving Rose watching, her confidence plummeting. She slid to her knees, tears in her eyes. She didn’t understand what had happened to her strength, to what happened to all those incredible feats she had been able to pull off before.
     “Do you really want to be able to fight like that again? Is your helplessness causing you that much pain and suffering? Isn’t this delightful!” the other voice in her head laughed.
     “Shut up!” Rose screamed, she pushed herself up again as the humanoid creature knocked the two others aside, slick blood forming an arc in the air as it slashed both of them.
     The humanoid creature seemed to ponder which target it was going to go for, to deliver the killing blow. It settled on the already weakened T-rex beast. Despite having no mouth or any other facial features other than an eye, its demeanour gave the impression that it was certainly relishing the carnage it was causing. The Spider creature tried to stand up, but found it hadn’t the strength.
     Rose couldn’t look at the scene in front of her. The two monsters didn’t have to fight for her, and they didn’t have to die for her either. To that end, she started running at the humanoid creature, this time the other creatures couldn’t get in the way, but she was determined to get in the way of them. She struck out with the sword, but the humanoid creature was ready, and choosing its moment wisely, it knocked the sword out of Rose’s hand with a swipe of its tail before it punched Rose into the ground, making a crater that only got bigger as it kept punching her down. It then loomed over her, its tail poised to strike into her, ending the fight once and for all.
     “I guess, I’ll have to step in after all, aren’t you incredibly lucky that I need you alive?” The voice in her head stated, allowing itself a sly chuckle at the end. Rose blacked out at this point, those words being the last thing she heard.

     Kurz and Mason watched what happened next in complete shock and horror. They too had thought it was all over as Rose fell to the ground, but what they weren’t expecting was her hand to shoot up at the last second, grabbing the head of the tail before it could do anything. She held it in place as the humanoid creature struggled to get free. Still holding on, Rose stood up. It was now that they could see her face, or the lack of it as it were. They didn’t know where the mask had come from, but there was a plain white one that completely covered her face without any visible slits for eyes or mouth. Her movements looked awkward, her head tilting erratically. Bands of crimson coloured energy started gathering at her wrists, spinning around them till they resembled barb wire at first, till threads shot out, becoming more chain-like. The ends of each chain culminated in jagged hooks and other cruel implements. Rose finally let go of the tail, and the humanoid creature hopped back a fair ways, wanting to put some space between them. It was at this point a red x formed across the mask, some of the colour dripping down like blood. With parts of her long hair sticking up in a jagged style, Rose started to move, dragging the energy chains with her. The movements of her body were unnerving to look at, as she jerked at random intervals. 

     The humanoid creature didn’t want to let her get too close to him, not with the weapons she’d crafted for herself. Its body shifted slightly, as though it was trying to gain an advantage over Rose, and it attacked with its tail again, this time having been lengthened so it didn’t have to go near her. She did nothing to try and evade the attack, instead, she wrapped it up with the set of chains from around her left arm, and then dragged the creature forward, straight into her own attack with the chains from around her other arm, the hooks tearing large chunks of rock away from the creature exposing more of its skin which started causing it to panic. The humanoid creature even sacrificed its tail to get away from the direct confrontation, once again escaping to where it thought Rose wouldn’t be able to attack it. This proved a fatal error as, tossing the tail aside, Rose whipped both sets of chains around with no care as to what was in their radius, and then sent them out after the humanoid creature, the chains magically growing longer when they needed to. They descended on the creature like a rain of blades, gouging and slashing with every flick of Rose’s wrist. The creature tried to escape but the hooks dug too deep within its rock-like skin and it was dragged towards Rose with barely any defence left. With the tables turned against it so decidedly, the creature tried one last defiant act, it took the last of the rock-like skin, and turned it into a spear, one that it launched at Rose point blank. A normal person would have been skewered, but not Rose, instead she caught it an inch from her face with her bare hand, it’s sharp edges cutting her hand open but she didn’t flinch from it, instead she commanded every hook to impale itself into the creature's body, each one sticking in deep. Once that was done, she cocked her head as the creature stared at her, now terrified about what was going to happen. Rose clicked her fingers and every chain was pulled away, ripping the creature into shreds. Underneath the almost magma like surface, the creature bled profusely as it lay there dying, whatever power had animated, had straight up deserted it now. Rose wasn’t finished yet though, she identified the biggest part of it, and then started attacking over and over again. There was no mercy to be had here.

     Watching this horrifying scene, Kurz and Mason sat in complete silence, both turning pale at the carnage they were seeing. They watched as the humanoid creature gave its last breath as it crumbled into dust, and Rose started to head towards them, spinning both sets of chains around.
     “Wait! Rose! It’s us!” Kurz shouted. “You’ve done it! You’ve won!”
     “I don’t think she can hear us!” Mason said. He’d recovered enough to move slightly but, neither of them were going very far.
     “ROSE! WAKE UP!” Kurz shouted once more, putting everything he had into it. Still, Rose sped up, her orderly pace breaking down into a spring, the chains bouncing along behind her.
     Seeing as there was no other option, Mason joined with Kurz in shouting Rose’s name, hoping to break through whatever madness she was currently in.
     “ROSE! DON’T LET YOUR ANGELIC GRACE BE CORRUPTED LIKE THIS!”
     If Mason had uttered that at any other point, Kurz would have said something to him, but with their lives on the line, he merely made a note of it, a fun piece of trivia he could use against him if they were to walk away from here alive.
     “ROSE! PLEASE, WE’RE YOUR FRIENDS! YOU HAVE TO WAKE UP!” Kurz pleaded, as she came frightfully close to them, to the point where they could see droplets of blood falling from the mask like tears.
It was at the last possible second that the mask started to crack, and swiftly, broke apart, the fragments dissolving before they could even hit the ground. The chains similarly dissipated and Rose collapsed to the ground, her face frozen in shock, as if she herself could scarcely believe what happened.

     Everything became still again, as it sunk in to Kurz and Mason that they had survived, yet that’s all they felt had happened. Kurz looked over to where their enemy had been mere minutes ago, and there was nothing. It had died swiftly and quietly in retrospect, it’s death overshadowed by the transformation that Rose underwent.

     If anything, the battle had only given them more questions, but at they very least, they had another day to wake up to in order to seek answers.

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Next Chapter (not finished yet!)

That's all for this week, by all rights next weeks should be fairly brief, but I've got a feeling there may be something to look at...hopefully!

Till then...

Keep on writing.

Peter James Martin

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Wednesday, 10 December 2025

#153 Riz-mas Surprise

Happy Blog Day Everyone

Today is a quick one, as is always the case between two chapters of Phantom Dawn. I do have some good news to share though, following my woes about writing last week.

That news? I've actually started a new draft for a story. I think I'm doing what's called a skeleton draft with this one (correct me if I'm wrong) in that I'm writing short un-descriptive paragraphs that outline what I want from each chapter. Doing this, I've been able to complete an outline that can be filled in when I actually start writing it properly. I'm approaching this story differently from others as there's essentially two threads wrapped around each other, being told alternatively. At the moment, I'm using the term Interlude a (followed by Interlude b etc etc) to differentiate it from the more prominent storyline. I've yet to properly work on it but then again, I've got Phantom Dawn craving my attention.

Hopefully I can get meat on those bones soon.

Let's see how our favourite duo are getting on...

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz



Riz-mas chaos has begun! Some good things with this one, though I do think I should have gone with one of my earlier ideas rather than what I did draw. Still, got another two Riz-mas strips to go, with the last one dropping on Christmas Eve.

I'm sure I can have some fun with that one!

That's all for this week.

Next time we'll have chapter 21 of Phantom Dawn which may be the penultimate chapter (not counting epilogue) but it also may not? All depends what I write and if it works. We are close to the end, and I'll probably say it several times, but thank you to everyone who has spared the time to read it. I know it hasn't been the most consistent quality of releases.

Till next time...

Keep on writing

Peter James Martin

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Wednesday, 3 December 2025

#152 After the Party + Short Diversions: Phantom Dawn Chapter 20

Happy Blog Day Everyone

Chapter 20 of Phantom Dawn is here, and with it, a new twist in Rose's fight. 

Not much else has been happening, but I've been deep in thought about other things relating to the stories, just need the energy to actually get things done.

I do miss writing, which seems like an odd thing to say since I'm still writing, hence the new chapter today. However, what I mean is writing without a deadline looming overhead (again, I know it's another odd thing to say when I'm the one setting these deadlines but that's the joy of being me, my mind likes to torment me).

In theory this is just starting the word processor up, choosing something, and writing away without worrying that I should be working on the thing that's needed fairly quickly (as has been the case with these Phantom Dawn chapters). A lot of this is clearly on me and my abysmal time keeping, along with other hobbies gobbling up all my spare moments.

It's not like I haven't got things to work on either, like Daemon Soul 2, the Avalon Tales spin off, another spin off (the first chapter of which may be coming sooner than you think), other story ideas (like the medieval mecha one I spoke about a few weeks ago). That's also not including any Brennan and Riz stories! So yeah, a lot I could be doing but when push comes to shove, there's always something that I should be working on instead.

Enough of all that though, I hear the party has finally stopped over with our favourite duo...

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz


The wonkiness of the first panel aside, there's some good work here, between that close up of Riz and Brennan’s expression. I don't normally transition from one storyline to another in the same strip, but since it's Riz-mas, I'm going to make an exception. What do I have planned you may ask? No idea really, like Brennan and Riz often do, I'm going to wing it in spectacular style. Will this last the whole month of December or end on Christmas Eve? I've got no idea.

Hope you stick with me through all of Riz’s incoming craziness!

Short Diversions: Phantom Dawn Chapter 20

The final fight is underway, but who will emerge victorious? With everything on the line, Rose has a difficult task ahead of her, as her foe has some tricks left to play.

Ready to throw down? Read on...

Phantom Dawn Chapter Index

Prologue


Chapter 1


Chapter 2


Chapter 3


Chapter 4


Chapter 5


Chapter 6


Chapter 7


Chapter 8


Chapter 9


Chapter 10


Chapter 11


Chapter 12


Chapter 13


Chapter 14


Chapter 15


Chapter 16


Chapter 17


Chapter 18


Chapter 19


Chapter 20


Chapter 21


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Chapter 20: Struggle


     In her focused state, Rose went to meet the creature head on, intent on making sure that it never passed the imagined boundary that led to Kurz and Mason, and beyond them, to the town. The creature was more than happy to meet her in the middle, moving to punch her with its right fist, which seemed to swell up the moment before impact. Rose threw herself backwards to avoid it, landing like a cat, and propelled herself forward, catching the creature by surprise with her own punch that caused its rocky surface to crack. The blow forced the creature back a little bit, but by nowhere near the amount her kick had done before, which meant the creature was back into the swing of things quickly, attacking again with frenzied blows. Rose weaved through them, before taking every opening she could to inflict more damage to the beast, her punches now tearing chunks of rocky material off, exposing the molten magma like substance underneath that was still glowing a brilliant white.


     From their un-enviable vantage point, Kurz and Mason could feel the heat extruding from the creature, noting how Rose acted like she wasn’t affected by it at all. Still, they could only watch, their bodies having given up any pretense that they could actually move, or even be any help whatsoever. Really, they should have been trying to move away, but that wasn’t an option either. The question that hovered over both of their minds was a simple one, would she be strong enough to overpower this creature like the others. They knew that she had to in order to save all their lives, but the flip side did poke its head through their beliefs. They didn’t verbalise it, lest they invoke it into fruition. For Mason’s part, while it lingered in his mind his faith in Rose was absolute, and he’d rather see himself fall before her if it was to make a difference. She’d trusted in him, so it was all he could think of doing in return. Kurz was more conflicted. He’d seen what she could do, and assumed that while there was probably a limit, they hadn’t seen it yet. What troubled him was when she’d hit that limit, and if that would be enough. In the short time he’d known her, he’d spent half of it either ignoring her, or distrusting her. Yet now, he was depending on her to save not only him, but everyone else. This left him to struggle with his feelings and actions, and his inability to do anything.


     Rose was completely oblivious to what they were thinking, every ounce of her being was devoted to stopping the monster before her, but she found her own options being limited by the effect they were having on her enemy. Yes, she seemed to be doing damage, but it wasn’t slowing the creature down any. Instead, its movements were slowly changing, the openings it was leaving for Rose to dodge into, were getting smaller. The monster slammed it’s fist into the ground, causing it to become unstable, and throwing Rose off the rhythm she’d created for herself, then it lurched forward, landing its first blow against her, knocking her as far back as her first kick had against it. She recovered quickly, and narrowly avoided another strike that would have taken the head of anyone else. Countering, she leapt up, and kicked the creature in the neck, a move which caused it to stagger. There was more and more of the molten skin showing now, the result of every attack she’d made.


     The creature, though, seemed to notice its own predicament, and roared in outrage, its cry echoing throughout the land, terrifying though in the town who heard it. All the stony skin pieces fell off, as the molten skin changed shape, shrinking down till it was more at Rose’s height instead of the hulking monstrosity it was before. There were jagged peaks sticking out of its back and out of its shoulders, and a singular red eye opened on what passed for its head. Its jaw hinged wide and it let out another roar. Rose prepared herself, undeterred by the metamorphosis before her. She charged in, but the creature’s speed was now even greater than before, and it evaded every move she was making, almost copying her own style. Whereas before, she could land blows on it, this time, all she was hitting was air.

     Kurz spat out in frustration. From where he and Mason were laid out, it looked like Rose was fighting a mirror copy of herself as far as movements were going.

     “What- What is that thing? I knew there were monsters out there but nothing like this!” Mason stuttered 

     “Everything before…All those others…and we thought they were the worse things…Or are there even more terrible things out there,” Kurz spoke quietly, so quiet he wasn’t aware that he’d made any sound.

     “Come on, Rose! My angel! Show us the hope we’ve put in you!” Mason yelled, in contrast. 

     If Kurz could, he would have given him the side eye, but as it was, there was nothing else to do, but watch and pray.


     Rose had tried mixing up her attacks, going from punching, to kicks and even an attempted shoulder barge, but none of them found their mark. 

     The creature then started its own attacks, and found no issue striking her with its full force. Every attack hit with the force of an explosion, and Rose was knocked back, crashing into the floor. She got back up after each one, but every time, it took that little bit longer.

     Running back towards the creature, Rose swung the sword with everything she could muster, and in turn the creature pulled back its right fist and they both struck at the same time, the impact causing a mini shockwave. The end result of this was that Rose was sent flying backwards again, smashing through several rocky outcrops, dropping the sword in the process.

     Both Kurz and Mason felt their heart in their throats as they watched her roll to a stop.

     For what seemed like the longest time, she laid there, not moving. The creature moved slowly towards her, its head tilting as its curiosity grew.

     Rose grasped for breath, pain flaring in every part of her body. It took her several moments to realise that she had complete control again. She took a step forward, and had to catch her breath as she collapsed down to one knee.

     What’s going on? She thought. Forcing herself back upright, she tried to settle her breathing, as her enemy advanced, intent on doing more damage.

     “Looks like your little monster here was able to force you back to how you were, isn’t that amusing?” the voice in her head whispered. “What will you do now? Are you strong enough without that other presence doing all the fighting for you?”

     “Shut up! I’ll do what I have to do to protect everyone! I’ll fight to my last breath if I have to. I can’t let this creature past me!” Rose shouted out.

     “Who- Who is she talking to?” Mason asked.

     “I think anyone would go crazy in this situation, but…” Kurz trailed off, he could tell that something was different now, it was clear to see that Rose often fell silent during her fights, something he’d only really picked up when the larger monster attacked. What this actually meant though, he didn’t know. He hoped it was a good omen rather than the opposite, they needed some luck right about now.

     “In that case, fight away ‘Rose’. Show me how far that’ll get you…” the voice chided.  

     This time, Rose didn’t answer the voice, she instead charged in without any further hesitation, but the results were even worse than last time. Now the creature didn’t even bother dodging her attacks, it just stood there as Rose’s hits did nothing. Even her kicks no longer caused any reaction when they landed, the creature shrugging them all off. It’s eye focused on her, and then it attacked again, beating her down with rapid punches, before kicking her away. 

     Rose groaned as she rolled over, clutching her side. She was battered, bruised but still alive, and despite the pain and the encroachment of her vision, she stood once more.

     “I can’t…I can’t give up!” She said like a mantra.

     The creature almost looked amused, as it went to strike again, not wanting to give her any ground. It made it half way to her when another roar stopped it dead.

     “Not another monster!” Mason cried out.

     Kurz fell back into the sand upon hearing it, his will drained completely.


     The roar was accompanied by the sound of something racing across the ground, its heavy feet making it sound like a stampede.

     Rose was the first one to see it, and her eyes grew wide as she recognised it instantly. This new intruder was the same beast she and Neal encountered when they met only a day or so ago. It still bore the wounds that she had inflicted on it whilst in the other state. She herself couldn’t remember the fight, not completely, but she did remember that she spared it’s life, not wanting to kill needlessly. The T-rex-like beast crashed into the other creature with tremendous force, catching it by surprise, and moving it backwards, away from Rose.

     “Is it…Protecting me?” Rose asked, not that there was anyone near her to give an answer.

     The T-rex-like monster backed off slightly, before swinging its tail around, but the other creature, now more prepared, took the blow in its stride before lashing out at the interloper.


     “The monsters are fighting each other? That’s a new one.” Mason’s emotions had run the gauntlet from fear all the way back to surprise.

Kurz managed to sit himself back up, already watching what was unfolding.

     “What is going on?” he uttered. He noted that the creature seemed to match the description his grandfather had given him before. What the importance of that was, he didn’t know right now. Before he could even speculate, the ground shook again, and another familiar cry filled the air. No sooner had the T-Rex creature turned up, but the ground heaved, and the spider-like monster from only a few hours earlier shot up from the ground, blood still seeping from where Rose cut off the eye stalk. With fangs bared it went for the humanoid creature, its sheer size allowing it to crash into the humanoid creature, causing cracks to appear in its reforged skin.

     Rose was baffled by the scene playing out in front of her.

     “Those pests…What are they doing?” Even the voice in her head was surprised.

     “They’re both protecting me…” Rose realised.


     The humanoid creature leapt into the air, giving it some breathing room against the other two.

     The T-Rex and the Spider creatures didn’t follow up, instead they deliberately put themselves in front of Rose, making it perfectly clear that any attempt at her would have to go through them. The humanoid creature, frustrated by the new obstacles, let loose a horrifying howl as its body changed once more. It kept the same size but its portions became more muscular, and more spikes covered its body. Its molten skin turned a deep crimson.


     Even with numbers on her side, Rose knew that this fight wasn’t over yet…

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Next Chapter

That's all for now folks!

Only about three chapters left now, and it's going to be a relief when this is over and done with!

Till next time,

Keep on writing

Peter James Martin

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Wednesday, 26 November 2025

#151 During the Party

Happy Blog Day Everyone

It's a fairly short post this week, as I'm sure you're all aware. In terms of other news, there is really anything. I haven't done any writing outside Phantom Dawn. I've been thinking about future projects and on a few decisions that'll greatly affect Daemon Soul 2 if I decide to pursue it, which means having to do a complete new draft. All of that just so I can shove a Christmas novellla in between book 1 and 2! Probably not worth the effort it'll take...


Anyway, let’s get a move on and head over to a certain duo!

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz

That looks like one wild party.

First off, no idea what happened in that 2nd panel there, actually, that's a lie, I absolutely do know what happened there. I tried to be clever and offer a slight perspective change on Riz addressing the other party goers. It did not work at all.

The final panel there is another Red Dwarf reference, as one of the show's characters point out: "It's not a party without a traffic cone!" Paraphrasing obviously. Not sure when this party became a three part deal but here we are. We've seen the beginning, we've got the rest above, guess that leaves the aftermath for next week...Though, I get the feeling that a certain holiday season is going to influence things somewhat...Hide the golden rats quick!

So, as I said, another quick week done and dusted. Chapter 20 of Phantom Dawn will be with you next week, and we are really in spitting distance of the end as Rose's fight against the creature continues. I really have to find a way to give it a nickname of sorts during the editing/ next draft process, it's getting hard to keep track of all the different creatures running around in the story!

Till next time,

Keep on writing

Peter James Martin

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Wednesday, 19 November 2025

#150 Party Time + Short Diversions: Phantom Dawn Chapter 19

Happy Blog Day Everyone

Still inching closer to the end of Phantom Dawn, and in today's chapter we see Rose join the fray! How much longer till the end? Well, you'll just have to read on to see for yourself! (Spoiler warning, a few more chapters to go!)

There's something else to talk about today, of course, but we'll have to head over to see our favourite man and rat duo to learn more...

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz



Yup, one hundred and fifty issues. Feels like it was just yesterday that I was talking about making it to issue 100. The amount of times I felt like quitting has been a lot more numerous (particularly over the summer where I was stuck in a low mood for a lot of it), but I made it to this milestone. Thank you to everyone who's read this far with me.

As for the comic itself, it may not be a flashy extravaganza but it does what it needs to, which is set up a new three part arc (definitely three parts as I've already got the ending in mind!). This, and what follows will tide things over till the three year anniversary hits in early January.

I must apologise for how off model Brennan and Riz look here, can never seen to get it just right at the moment, but at least you can tell its still them, I suppose.

Hope you all stick around till the next milestone.

Short Diversions: Phantom Dawn Chapter 19

At the end of last chapter, Kurz was shocked to see Rose racing to his rescue, but what is really running through her head as she stands ready to face this nes gargantuan threat...Let's find out together...

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Chapter 19



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Chapter 19: Rose Blooms

     Rose didn’t know what had awoken her from her nightmares, but she had been grateful all the same. She had bolted upright from the cold hard floor she had woken up on, scaring the life out of Si who had not been expecting it.
     “Rose!” Neal exclaimed as he turned to see her looking around dazed.
     “Where…” She said, not even understanding what she was supposed to be searching for. “Where is it?”
     “Where is what?” Neal asked as he went to her side, trying to calm her down, but she was too restless to be settled
     “I need to find it…I need to find what I lost!” Rose shouted.
     “Lost? What are you talking about?” Neal wanted to make sense of what she was saying, but he also had other concerns that he needed to focus on. “Please listen, there is something I need to tell you.”
     “Yeah, we’re all going to die!” Si blurted out, which did distract Rose from her own woes.
     “Die?”
     As if on cue, the monster roared from far away, but its intensity shook the buildings and the people, and left no room to doubt what Si had been ranting about.
     “Another monster?” Rose felt that feeling that had overtaken her before already tugging at the corners of her mind, but that other voice she’d heard was also there.
     “Go…Do what you do so well…” the voice teased, but Rose knew that she had little choice in the matter.
     “Where is Kurz? And Mason?” Rose looked around, seeing neither of them.
     “They are…” Neal wanted to find the right words to tell her, but the explosion that rocked them said everything. Everyone who had gathered there, stared in the direction of the plume of smoke that drifted upwards.
     “Did they do it?” Si asked softly at first, but repeated it louder when the silence lasted longer than a second, this was then followed by an outburst of pure exhilaration.
     “WOOO THEY DID IT! THEY BLEW IT UP! Isn’t that fantastic, Rose…Rose?” Si realised that she was no longer there. “Where did she go?” 
     “Rose?” Neal hadn’t even seen her move, but now, he could see her, very faintly in the distance, running at full pelt in the direction of the blast, and towards where he knew Kurz and Mason had been. Mason’s sword that they had laid at her side was also missing, leaving no mistake that Rose had taken it. Neal’s only hope was that she’d find them there, maybe battered, but otherwise safe and sound. That hope was short lived when they heard the monster yet again, a roar that now seemed more intense than before. They knew the battle was only just beginning.

     Even when running at full pelt, Rose felt something shift inside her. All the other times she had fought, she only became aware that there had been a change in her demeanour after the fact. Now, her senses sharpened, and there was an overriding drive to fight. She lost direct control of her body to this drive, but had remained conscious throughout, a huge change from her last fight. The sword that she had been gifted was firmly in her hand.
     “Enjoying the action?” The voice called to her. “You can take control whenever you want you know, you just have to remember who, and what, you are.” The voice sounded like she was teasing now, knowing far more than she would ever let on.
     “I just want to save my friends…and everyone else.” Rose admitted. Looking through her own eyes as if they were windows, she saw the monster for the first time, a large humanoid shaped mass of stone with pulsing magma veins. She saw Mason and Kurz on the floor, cowering before the creature. Rose’s body continued to move on its own, and she kicked the creature hard in the chest. Despite not being in control, Rose still felt the impact keenly, but it worked as the creature was knocked back.
     Rose wanted to reach out to her friends, to check on them, but her eyes, her real ones, were still locked on the creature that was getting back up, its own gaze fixated on her. 
     “Remember, you can take control at any point, but if you do, who’ll protect them? You need this power, like the monster you are.” The voice openly mocked. 
     Rose wanted to scream out that she wasn’t a monster, but it dawned on her that she still had no idea who she actually was. Maybe this state she was currently in, was her real self.
     The creature was quick to stand again, but Rose stood in between it, and Kurz and Mason.
     “No, you’re wrong! See? I’m not a monster at all!” Rose screamed in her head, trying to silence the other voice who kept laughing.
     “If only you knew what I knew, then you wouldn’t be saying that at all! What you have to do…It would make you crawl into a hole and wait for the end!” The other voice responded.
     “If you think that’s what would happen, then why don’t you just tell me who I am! Let me have my proper name back!” 
     “Because it’s more fun this way, besides, telling you everything I knew wouldn’t do much for our situation right now? You’d be dead before I even got half way through the story! Now, be a good girl and shut up and watch the fight, or again, if you’d prefer, you could take over, just without all the benefits you’re currently enjoying.” 
     The way the voice spoke irritated Rose to no end, information wrapped in insulting riddles covered with a hint of sadism. Whatever this voice was, it was enjoying Rose’s plight all too much. What the voice was though, would have to wait as the creature stole Rose’s attention once more, as it ran it, arms ready to grab her. As loath as she was to admit it, she knew she’d have to leave whatever force was controlling her behind the wheel.

     Kurz and Mason were completely oblivious to what was going on in Rose’s head. They had simply thought that she was in the same state as before, that strange fighting urge that took control of her and allowed her to do superhuman feats. They were worried about her of course, but only in the sense that they didn’t know how long she could keep this state up before succumbing to exhaustion, especially given the short amount of rest she’d gotten since last time.
     “We have to fight alongside her!” Mason gasped, fighting through his pain. He clutched his chest where his lungs were, aware that he must have had several broken ribs, and potentially worse.
     “You know just as well as I do that we’d just screw things up!” Kurz snapped. “We’re no better to her than a paper shield!”
     “Dammit! Dammit!” Mason cursed, but he didn’t even have the strength to lash out in anger.
     “All up to you now Rose…” Kurz offered a prayer. It was all that he could do.

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Sorry if the ending was a little abrupt there, time got the better of me when writing the chapter. I was planning to go into more detail over the initial stages of the fight, but that'll just get rolled into the next chapter, which coincidentally will fall around the first week in December.

Till next time...

Keep on writing

Peter James Martin

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Wednesday, 12 November 2025

#149 A Dirty Job

Happy Blog Day Everyone!

A quick look at the title has made me realise that next week is the 150th blog I've done since restarting it back in January 2023! Feels like it was only yesterday... Not sure what I'll be doing to celebrate it, best get thinking of something!

Not much to report on in over news, so lets move on to our favourite man and rat duo!

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz



It's certainly a dirty job that someone has to do (more often than not it's me!) Though on saying that, shouldn't Riz be doing it anyway? Guess he certainly doesn't think so! I'm sure that if Riz tries to negotiate a much higher price in future we may see the return of the infamous Riz-a-pult, that'll definitely speed the process up!

Being an in-between week, thats your lot for today, a short and sweet installment.

Next week we're straight back into Phantom Dawn with Chapter 19, and Rose kicking off the final fight of the story...It's going to be an interesting one no doubt!

Till then,

Keep on writing

Peter James Martin

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Wednesday, 5 November 2025

#148 Riz Alone Epilogue + Short Diversions: Phantom Dawn Chapter 18

Happy Blog Day Everyone

Today is a brief one (well, technically not really as we have the latest chapter of Phantom Dawn for your reading pleasure!), but there is relatively scant news of anything else I'm afraid. I have new ideas floating around my head which certainly aren't helping! Anyone up for a fantasy epic inexplicably featuring giant robots (powered by a magician working over time?), anyone at all or just me! Probably just me then...

I've also been thinking about the eventual edit of Phantom Dawn and my early thoughts of changing the perspective to first person rather than the third I currently use. Chapters like today's would certainly disappear under that situation...

Before you get to read to see what I mean, let's move on and see how Riz fared after his time alone...

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz


...And that's the end of that! So yeah, I decided to do just one more part and it came out okay (folded arms are apparently the bane of my existence at the moment).

What's next though? Hmm no idea but I do think the devilish little gears in Riz’s head are spinning with regards to the holiday season...oh dear.

Short Diversions: Phantom Dawn Chapter 18

At last, things are moving quicker now, as Kurz and Mason attempt to fend off the gigantic menace, in order to buy time for Rose to recover. Will their plan succeed? Read on to find out!

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Chapter 18




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Chapter 18: Stand and Fight

     Kurz’s first look at the creature made him realise how little their chance of success had really been. It was the red eyes that he noticed first, and how high off the ground they were. The spider-like creature that Rose had fought had been big, but this one was in a league of its own, standing several storeys above that one. Its general shape was of a bipedal monster with a bulbous back, covered in a rocky skin with magma glowing in the cracks. Its hands, they could be called hands, looked like long thin diamonds that glinted in the glow of the Phantom Dawn, and the monster’s teeth looked to be made of the same material. Luckily for them, speed was not an attribute that the creature possessed as it slowly lumbered towards the town. Each heavy step shaking things.
     “Any ideas?” Mason asked hesitantly. “I was kind of hoping that it was another small one…”
     “Me too, but we’ve got to deal with what’s in front of us,” Kurz replied, gritting his teeth as he looked the monster over again. It was getting closer and closer to the town with each massive step, and there really wasn’t anything the pair could do to hurt it.
     Can we slow it down though? Kurz thought. He scanned the scant area between them and the monster, what he needed was a sinkhole to open up, one large enough to swallow it in one go, thus giving ample time for the evacuation. How this would be accomplished though was the hard part. Then, an idea struck him, and he knew that they had to act fast.
     “Mason! Do you know of anything in any of Finch’s storehouses around here that can cause an explosion?” He asked, wasting no time breathing between words. “Even better, is there any in the direction of that thing!” 
     “Well, yeah, but that’s going to be on top of us before we can set anything!”
     “We need to buy time for everyone to get out of here, and this is how we do it!”
     “And if this fails?”
     “We’ll cross that bridge when it comes to it, alright?”
     Mason looked up at the creature getting ever closer, and thought of Rose, and clenched his fist.
     “Fine! Follow me, if you can keep up!”

     Mason led Kurz to a small ramshackle shed that the latter realised he’d constantly overlooked due to how it looked half buried. Inside it were different containers that had clearly been repurposed. Various coloured liquids sloshed around as Mason grabbed what he could, and shoved even more into Kurz’s arms. For his part, Kurz spotted a sturdy rope, and made sure to grab it, wrapping it around his arm.
     “Do I even want to know what’s in these?”
     “You want things that’ll explode, these will explode. Just be careful with them otherwise we’ll be the ones doing the exploding!”
     “I’ve got no plans of dying tonight, so don’t you worry about me,” Kurz replied, as he looked over to the creature which was now within a few footsteps of the town. The panic that had been a constant background noise was sounding more organised, so Kurz hoped that meant his grandfather had been able to marshal an effective evacuation order. If things didn’t turn out how he wanted with this plan, he’d hoped the people were prepared to run for the hills, and that nothing else was waiting for them. 
     “Are we doing this?” Mason asked, trying to appear more stoic then he was actually feeling.
     “Of course, just follow my lead.” 

     The pair got as close to the creature as they dared, trying to keep steady as the ground around them shook violently with every footstep.
     “Will these explode if we leave them for him to stand on?” Kurz asked.
     “We’ll need to put it near those sharp rocks, one spark will take care of all of this. Is it a bad time to mention that the blast radius of all this might include us?” Mason added.
     “I kind of figured that, I’ll take my chances all the same.”
     Mason could only nod at Kurz’s determination, he shared it, but he was left with a lingering sense of if it was enough. If this act could atone for anything he did while working under Finch. If it would be enough in Rose’s eyes.
     “Just tell me when you want to throw them,” Mason announced. “Though I didn’t think I’d be doing something like this by your side, of all people.”
     “The feeling’s mutual. Wasn’t what I thought of either. Especially after beating you up earlier.”
     “Alright, alright, you don’t have to rub it in okay? It’s only slightly more humiliating then getting beaten up by Rose.”
     “Slightly more?”
     “Well, she has super strength and is a goddess. You’re just a human, like me.”
     “Can’t argue with that, but these two humans are about to cause a big explosion.”
     “That is one way to go I suppose…” 
     The pair stopped just as the creature was lifting its foot up again. It was now or never, as they only had this small window to try and do damage, and they had to take it.
     “Ready?” Kurz asked.
     “As ready as you can get. Throw everything on those rocks there,” Mason pointed at the perfect place to execute their plan.
     The creature moved its foot above where they were standing, and seeing as they had no time left, the pair threw everything they had, littering the area with what they hoped was enough explosives to do damage. Container after container landed at the site, with the foot getting closer and closer overhead. Mason grabbed Kurz and threw him off to the side, before leaping himself, as the colossal foot crushed the area. The blast was instantaneous, causing more shockwaves than what the creature itself was doing. A plume of fire shot up and to their shock, the creature howled in pain, and then, as if to use up all their luck, the ground underneath collapsed, and the creature started to sink as the land became unstable. Kurz and Mason scrambled to get away as fast as their legs could carry them. Neither said a word as they silently watched the creature disappear amidst smoke and the rolling earth.
     It was only once the dust had settled before Mason dared say something.
     “What a night eh?” he nudged Kurz in the arm who was still laying there, as the shock slowly subsided.
     “Why did you throw me?” he sat up bolt right, casting an accusing glance at Mason.
     “Because I was trying to save your life! You idiot! If I hadn't done that, you’d been squished and then blown up! A little gratitude would be nice!”  
     “Gratitude? You messed up that throw up and you would have killed me!”
     “Well, you’re still alive so quit complaining about it!”
     The pair then laughed at the absurdity of the situation, before reality began to creep back in.
     “Do you think that was enough?” Mason peered over the hole, wanting to get a good look at what lay beneath. All he could see was smoke, and rock, but he couldn’t tell where the rock had come from, if it had been blown up from the surface, or blasted off the creature.
     Kurz didn’t have to reply, as the creature did that, with a roar that got the impression across that all they’d managed to do was enrage it, rather than killing it.
     They backed up in shock as the ground began shaking again, as though something was clawing at it repeatedly, then the creature shot out from the ground, landing ahead of them with a tremendous crash. It was now a lot smaller than before, having lost a lot of its weight, and size. It also seemed to move with more purpose and speed. While it was no longer the towering giant it had been, it was still the biggest threat put against them, and now, it wasn’t looking at the town, it was staring at Kurz and Mason, clearly recognising them as the cause for its pain. With unexpected ferocity, the creature charged at the pair, its speed having increased dramatically, and it was upon them before they had even realised it.      Mason took the first blow, the creature kicking him mid stride before turning to face Kurz fully. Mason flew through several mounds of dirt before sliding to a stop, his body feeling nothing but the pain of the impact.
     Kurz was determined not to let that happen to him, and rolled out of the way when the creature took a swing at him, kicking up a huge groove in the ground from the sheer force of the blow. Getting back to his feet, Kurz took the rope off his arm and started swinging it. There was no plan in mind, just the desire to not let it all end there. The creature ran forward with a punch, its rocky fingers folding up to make a fist the size of Kurz, one blow would shatter every bone in his body with little effort. He dodged out of the way, taking advantage of how close he was and how slow the creature was at turning, despite its much improved agility elsewhere. In between the dodges, Kurz prepared the rope. He knew there were some tricks he wouldn’t be able to pull off, but he wasn’t without options. Narrowly avoiding another blow, he secured the rope to an old pole that jutted out of the ground, making sure it was as tight as could be within the time he had. He had to let go of the rope for its own sake as the creature rampaged around, then the perfect opportunity presented itself, as he went under the creature’s foot as it went to stamp on him, and he grabbed the rope again. Either the monster didn’t acknowledge the rope or didn’t care about it, as it took no notice of it as it took steps towards Kurz, who had arranged himself to be on his back, the rope firmly in his two hands. He pulled it tight and the pattern he’d carefully wrought it into became apparent as it wrapped around the legs, constricting the monster’s movement, and causing it to fall over with a thud that cracked the ground, causing more of it to fall into the already massive pit. Kurz let go of the rope when it became clear what was going to happen as the creature disappeared over the edge again, rope and all. He had no time to be happy with the outcome as he knew it was only temporary. He rushed over to Mason who was struggling to get back on his feet, his arms buckling under the strain.
     “We got to move! Now!” Kurz yelled.
     “Then help me!” Mason replied as he collapsed again. “That thing hits worse than Rose!”
     Kurz grunted in dissatisfaction but helped him all the same, but the pair hadn’t got more than a few meters away when they heard the roar again, as the creature landed in front of them, the magma in the cracks burning white. The pair were helpless before it, and it seemed to know this as it advanced on them slowly.
     “Is it bad taste to say nice knowing you?” Mason asked, wishing he had the strength to stand alone.
     “Coming from you, yes, it is bad taste, but I get the sentiment.” Kurz himself didn’t have the strength to do anything else. The act of resistance he already performed had taken everything out of him, leaving him with nothing in reserve.  
     “Do you think it’ll be painless?” Mason enquired, sadly already knowing the answer.
     Kurz laughed nervously, and faced the creature dead in what he assumed was its eyes. They both awaited whatever attack was launched at them, but the sound of running distracted them, and even the creature turned to see what was the source of it. The next thing the pair saw was the creature being shunted out of the way, as Rose, already in whatever state she’d been in when the last creature attacked, landed a jumping kick. Without acknowledging either Mason or Kurz, Rose stood ready to fight.

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That's it for this week!

Till next time...

Keep on writing

Peter James Martin

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Wednesday, 29 October 2025

#147 Riz Alone part 4

Happy Blog Day Everyone

Not much to talk about at the moment, my plans to republish my missing books (read: all of the buggers) have gone slightly astray.  I've got the KDP account online but got to the tax section and everything screeched to a halt. This is because of some very good luck via eBay that has pointed me out to the taxman and while I should be covered by the fact I was just trying to have a clean out, I'm not taking any chances. However, this does mean I can actually plan better and release new content the same time as the others. What will this new content be? I've a few ideas but it will be eBook form only, for now, due to its length. Does get to mean I get to play around in sketch again.

Anyhow, onto the other outstanding item of business...

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz



And with this, the Riz Alone saga comes to a close, and its a fitting end to the sorry tale!

Unsure what form next weeks will take (speaking of, first time not doing a NaNoWriMo this year, going to feel weird), if I'll drop an epilogue to this, or just jump to the next story as if nothing ever happened...

Guess it'll depend on what I think up next week!

That's it for today, join me next week for another chapter of Phantom Dawn (finally get a look at the monster!).

Till then...

Keep on writing!

Peter James Martin

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Wednesday, 22 October 2025

#146 Riz Alone Part 3 + Short Diversions: Phantom Dawn Chapter 17

Happy Blog Day Everyone

Chapter 17 of Phantom Dawn drops today (and I'm not entirely sure when I dropped the sub title from it, but it may have been formatting related due to the way I do my sub headings). Hoping to have the story wrapped up before 2026 starts (I just got a shudder typing that year, where is all the time going, and can I get a refund?).

In other news, I tried doing something new the other day, what I think is called exploratory writing? Basically, I have a basic point in my head, in this case a mix of genres, and just start writing with no end goal or anything else story related in mind. My attempt so far is so-so but I've got plenty of ideas now on how to improve it, and to develop the idea even further, even some that explain how things came to be! I'd probably expect to see it turn up here soon enough...

Besides all that, I'm still trying to get the other books re-uploaded to amazon but a mixture of time and fear is slowing me down here, especially with the Brennan and Riz releases as I was able to get a letter proving I own the rights to Daemon Soul, no such luck with the other two. Keep watching this space.

With all that said, let's move over and see what Riz is actually getting up to in his time alone...

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz



Yeah, this really isn't going to end well is it? Some oddities snuck through in the drawing phase here, like Riz’s hand towards the end and how small it looks compared to the other one. Still I think I set myself up for a really fun one next week.. 

Short Diversions: Phantom Dawn Chapter 17

I can see the end of the story, it's close but to get there...Ho boy! At the very least this chapter gets to tease a bit more about Rose's mystery, and then set the stage for the final confrontation....of this story anyway. I'm aware there's some plot holes that are glaringly obvious but I will sort them, either in the next few chapters or when it gets edited into a more coherent whole.

Anyway, on with the chapter!

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Chapter 17





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Chapter 17: Urgency

     Rose’s eyes opened weakly, recognising the black sea she found herself in. She tried to move her arms but found they were unresponsive.
     Why am I back here again? She thought to herself. The events that had just happened slowly dripped back into her head, and she remembered the fight, she remembered the monster retreating, and she remembered falling to the ground. She brought her knees up to her chest and allowed herself to float there, suspended by the dark waters. She didn’t know what she was supposed to do now, but there was something different about where she was. It was subtle at first, she didn’t even recognise it. Then it became more prominent till she opened her eyes again, and looked up, seemingly out of the water and to whatever lay beyond it, as there, shining away in all its malevolent glory, was the Phantom Dawn.
     What’s that doing here? She stared up at it, and felt a force tugging at her, causing her to slowly rise. A moment later, she broke through the water that she’d been trapped in, and hovered there. She looked to see if there was any sign of a horizon, but saw only the endless ocean, the Phantom Dawn’s reflection twinkled tantalisingly, almost beckoning her back into the depths, but she continued upwards, towards the source of the ethereal light itself. As the light filled her vision, she passed through its boundaries.

     “She’s moaning again,” Si said, peering over the sofa at her. “Shouldn’t we do something?” He asked Neal, but the old man shook his head.
     “No, we can make her comfortable, but there’s not a great deal we can do. I doubt we could rouse her so easily. She clearly needs the rest.”
     “Doesn’t look like she's enjoying it though.”
     “Well..” Whatever Neal was going to say never left his lips as both he and Si heard the same sounds that has caused Kurz and Mason to panic. 
     “What, was that?” Si said, already looking for the best exit out of the room, and then formulating how long it would take him to run for safety.
     “Now of all times…” Neal muttered. “Si! You have to help me to move her! We need to protect her till she wakes up!”
     “Well, when will that be!” Si cried out. “I should be over that hill and far away right about now!”
     “Just help me!” Despite his age, Neal moved swiftly, motioning Si to grab Rose’s legs while he gently picked her up by the shoulders. Relenting, Si obliged.
     “And we’re supposed to take her where? If that thing is as massive as its roar was, we’re thoroughly screwed.”
     “Ah…” Neal tried to think, almost uttering several places, but discounting them all.
     “I can tell you where we’re going to take her,” Kurz said as he barged in the room, breathing heavily. “We’re going to take her to the middle of the town, we can’t be sure of which direction that monster out there is going to attack from, so this is the safest plan for now.” 
     “Yeah! What he said,” Mason agreed, coming in behind him. He stopped to take a quick breath then stepped in front of Si. “I’ll grab her, we can move faster with only one person doing the carrying!” He didn’t wait for the others to say anything, he just picked her up.
     “I have lots of questions right now, but my safety takes precedence. So where the hell should we be going then?” Si asked animatedly.
     “The centre of town, at least till we’ve established which direction the threat is coming from. So Mason, granddad, you two head there, me and Si are going to warn everyone else!” Kurz decided, much to Si’s horror.
     “Wait, what? I didn’t agree to anything!” he protested, but Kurz wasn’t having any of it, and ignored him.
     “Organising a defence is going to be tougher, but all we have to do is distract until an evacuation route is secured,” Kurz led the small group to the door.
     “Looks like Finch is going to get what he wanted after all…” Mason admitted.
     “If that monster turns this place into a crater then it’s going to be no use to him anyway. Besides, we’ve got a couple of aces up our sleeve,” Kurz looked at Rose, knowing that she was one of them, despite his reluctance to fully accept it.
     Mason had caught on quickly to what he meant, but still wanted to know what other chances they had.
     “...And aside from her? What are the other aces?”
     “There’s people poking and prodding the Heaven’s Rods. They get those back online, then we’ve won.”
     “...And the chances of that are?”
     “A hope is a hope isn’t it?”
     “We are all going to die aren’t we?” Si despaired.

     After she phased through the Phantom Dawn, Rose found herself standing in a whitespace, her surroundings giving her the impression that she was somewhere liminal. She was able to move normally but there was nowhere to go to. Nothing seemed to exist, nothing in any direction. She daren’t call out in case her voice shattered the realm, casting her back to the place she was before. Taking a few careful steps forward, she looked around to see if anything had changed, even the slightest vibration. When she was beginning to lose hope, she felt like she was being watched keenly. Then, as if in response to that feeling, multiple figures appeared around her, each one semi transparent and cast in shadow. There was no distinct features that Rose could make out on these figures and they were grouped together, but she didn’t know why. Each of them were posed as if they were portraying a scene. She reached out for the closest one, and her fingers passed through it, disrupting the image and caused her to recoil.
     “Why are you so afraid, child?” a distorted female voice called out. Although she didn’t recognise it, she was glad to have someone else there. “Don’t you recognise these?” 
Rose went to speak, but found she couldn’t.
     “You are still nothing like your old self, such a pity. At least you’ve started to remember something…” As the voice spoke, roses sprang up from the ground, stretching as far as the eye could see. “Maybe if you find this palace, a garden of roses, then you can remember everything, even your lost name. We both depend on it.”
     Rose tried her hardest to speak, wanting to call out to the voice who clearly knew more than what she was saying, but still, there was no words.
     “Even without your memories, you could be complete, but you must have lost it when you crashed. So sad. Your hand calls for it, I can tell by the way you wielded that cheap imitation before…”
     Looking down at her hands, Rose didn’t know what she was going on about. She wasn’t holding anything, and the only thing she remembered from before that she was holding was the sword that Mason gave her. Was that what the voice meant?
     Is she talking about the sword? Should I have my own sword? As the thoughts went swirling through Rose’s head, the voice spoke again.
     “Seems like you have a lot to think about, but it’s time for you to return to oblivion, until their voices reach you. See you soon, Rose,” the voice chuckled and Rose suddenly started to fall through the floor, grabbing at each of the flowers in vain, but the black ocean was awaiting her again.

     “Do you think she’ll wake up soon?” Mason asked Kurz as they approached the nominal center of the town.
     “I hope so, we could really use her right now…” Kurz replied as the monster’s roar filled the air again, but it was now uncomfortably close, Si and Neal had done their best to wake people and get them moving and it was their screams that hinted at the horror they were now facing, as the beast was finally close enough to see as it bore down on the town.

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That's your lot for this week,

Till next time,

Keep on writing

Peter James Martin

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Wednesday, 15 October 2025

#145 Riz Alone Part 2

Happy Blog Day Everyone

I think you all know the drill now, the week between chapters always gets the short end of the straw.

I wish I had more to say, I really do. I'm hoping to do some fun things soon enough, to try and turn things around but its going to take a lot of will power, and even more know how. The latter of which is in drastically short supply!

Get it done right, and I could be moving forward again, do it wrong...and its really no different to how things are at the moment. Guess I haven't got too much to lose.

Living in fun times.

At least someone else might be having fun though...

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz



Was torn on wether to do this strip or just dive into the gags. As you can see, this is the direction I went. Might have been a mistake but it's far too late to deal with that now!

Live and learn, you live and learn.

Got two parts, possibly three if I want to do a Brennan returns scenario on top of it. What will Riz do? We'll find out...

That's all for this week.

Next time, Rose and Co will return as the biggest threat yet makes itself known! Alas though, our heroine is exhausted and currently unconscious, will she wake in time to prevent a tragedy? Time will tell...

Till then...

Keep on writing

Peter James Martin

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