Wednesday, 24 September 2025

#142 Not Rizs Favourite Thing + Short Diversions: Phantom Dawn Chapter 15

Happy Blog Day Everyone

Chapter 15 of Phantom Dawn is here, concluding Rose's current fight, but how lomg will she get to rest? Better read on to find out.

Before that though, Riz is about to get an unexpected (and unwanted) surprise...

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As unbiased as I can be (that is to say, I'm not unbiased at all) the third panel here is my favourite that I've drawn in a while. The 2nd panel though, I tried a few things that didn't work as I wanted. That being said, its a fun look at Riz worst time of the week!

Short Diversions: Phantom Dawn Chapter 15

The final part of Rose's defence is here, following Mason's shock intervention last time. Was that enough to tip the scales? Better read on to find out!

Phantom Dawn Chapter Index
















Chapter 15

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Chapter 15: A Moment to Breath

     The monster came at her, its legs seemed to be pounding the ground with even more force than it had been doing. All the dust that was being thrown in the air reflected the dying rays of sunlight that had managed to break through the dominating cloud cover. Rose held her ground, preparing a swing, probably the only one she would get in given the pure force beating down on her. She knew she would have to make this count, and she intended to do that.
     Both Kurz and Mason wanted to pull their gazes away, but found they couldn’t, they eyes locked on the scene, trepidation rolling off them as sweat. Neither said a word, but their faces betrayed that intent, showing the fear. They also knew that Rose was the only hope the town would have, as neither of them were in the same league as this monster, and there was bound to be others lurking out there. Evacuating the whole town was a timely affair, something they didn’t have a lot of.
     Neal made his way to them just as the monster was unsettlingly close to hitting Rose.
     “Rose…” Was all he managed to muster, as his will to say anything else had left him as it had them.

     With every micro second that passed, the monster and Rose got closer and closer to their inevitable clash, yet Rose never wavered, there was no sign that she was going to flee. The contact point between the two arrived and Rose leapt into action, swinging her sword and using all the momentum that the monster had against it. To observers, there was only a sound of steel against flesh, and then nothing as the monster slowed down, and Rose, whilst in a different position now, looking like she had just landed back on her feet, was still standing.
     There was abated breath to see what the outcome was, as everyone tried to work out what exactly had happened.
     “Did she do it?” Mason whispered, being the first to speak again.
     “I…” Kurz went to speak, but movement from the monster caught their attention, bringing the focus back to it as it let out a chilling howl, one that made it quite clear how much pain it was in.
     To those looking, the reason for the howl became increasingly obvious as a large wound had opened up on its face with several of its eye stalks now missing. The creature started to thrash around, till it turned around fully, and saw Rose, pointing the now bloody blade at it. She didn’t say a word, not that she needed to, as the monster seemed to get the point, and ran, jumping over the girl who had done the damage. It didn’t take long for the creature to vanish on the horizon. With the large one now having left, the little ones also scattered away from the scene, with some digging their way underground once more. Then, less than ten minutes after it had all ended, a sense of peace settled over the town, indicating that the danger had passed, for now.

     The townsfolk had all gathered from their hiding places, and word quickly spread out amongst them over what had fully transpired. The awe which people had initially placed on Rose after how she had dealt with Mason had now been replaced with some fear. That she was strong they had accepted without much question, his skills being needed to deal with the very human threat they were up against then. Now, they had seen her fight against the monsters with seemingly equal or even superior strength, and they were unnerved in the extreme. Low mumblings about her true origins made their way to Kurz’s ears, and he kind of agreed with them, just like when he’d learned about her earlier feat. Humans could not stand against the beasts the way she had, not without either serious armour and equipment, even the famous trappers had to rely on cunning and traps.
     
     Mason had equally conflicting thoughts, but at the same time, things actually made a little sense to him, the way she’d manhandled him before, that strength. He’d called her an angel to be poetic, but he started to wonder if that was really the case. He knew he should have been scared, yet she was also the first person in a very long time to actually show him any warmth or concern. Monsters weren’t capable of that, he was positive. He had a different problem though, as many had also realised he wasn’t where he should have been, and while Rose was clearly the topic of choice, there were threats being made against him as well, trying to link him with the very monster they had just survived. If he went to Rose now, to check on if she was okay, he knew it would drag her into his own misdeeds. Still, he couldn’t leave her alone at a time like this. He went to step towards her, but he was almost knocked off his feet as something ran past him. Mason never saw what it was till the blur was in front of him. The shape only became clearer the more it got closer to Rose, that of a little girl. 
     “Misssss!” the little girl screamed out.
     Rose was still staring into space, holding the sword as though it was the most natural thing in the world to her. The girl ran straight into her, with a force that would have bowled most over.
     Looking down at the girl sobbing on her legs, Rose’s empty eyes showed no memory of who the girl was.
     “I was so scared!” the little girl continued, never once glancing up.
     “Cecily…” The name escaped Rose’s lips as she slowly returned to normal, the feeling that had overtaken her retreating to whence it came. It was at this point that the little girl did look up, and saw those friendly eyes again. While the adults around her had been wary, it didn’t matter to Cecily, she knew a hero when she saw one. Rose knelt down beside her, and hugged her tight.
     “I’m so glad you’re safe,” Rose said happily.

     Looking at the touching scene, Mason noted the reactions of the other onlookers now that the girl had effectively shattered the tension. Some, seeing the child running freely towards Rose, embracing her without fear, allowed their views to soften. Others still held the contempt in their eyes, but begrudgingly accepted that their lives had been saved, and it wasn’t the time nor the place to take things any further. Mason noted the couple of others who had chosen that moment to walk away, their disgust palpable. He didn’t want to take a gamble that their own views of him had changed so turned to walk away, not knowing where he was going to go.
     “Oi! Mister!” The same little girl who had ran to Rose, was now running straight at him, with a speed that he didn’t think was possible from one so small.
     “Hey! Wait, you’re going to hit me!” Mason yelled at her, but she didn’t listen, and like a wrecking ball, jumped into him, causing him to lose balance, falling over backwards.
     “Good grief, kid! What are your parents feeding you!” He croaked out.
     “Soup and love!” Cecily replied. “Miss said I had to keep you from sneaking away!”
     “Miss?” It took an embarrassing amount of time before Mason realised who she meant, and sure enough, by the time he cottoned on, Rose was walking towards him.

     Kurz was also watching the scene, but his own emotions were more mixed now then they were when Rose’s strength became apparent. He didn’t know what she was, that calm exterior she had presented with, contrasted sharply with the prowess she seemed to possess. He didn’t know if he should approach her or not, and ultimately, he declined to go to her, wanting to keep his distance, even if just for now. What this event did spark in him though, was the curiosity to learn more about her. Was this the extent of her powers, and what was she really. The way she was acting with Mason was also a cause for concern, as she’d been quick to befriend someone who was undefendable in Kurz’s opinion.

     Mason was still standing awe struck when Rose approached him, he saw she was about to speak, and started his own speech, pre-empting her:
     “My lady, I don’t deserve this!” He knelt down, and bowed his head before her.
Rose was taken aback by the outburst, but undaunted in saying what she wanted to say.
     “Thank you,” She presented the handle of the blade back to Mason, gesturing to him to take it off her. “I wouldn’t have been able to defend everyone without your help.” 
     “My…My help?” Mason stuttered. “I…I don’t know what to say to that.” He was still declining to look her in the face, afraid to see if she held the same judgment in her eyes that the rest of the town seemed to have, despite her kind words.
     “You don’t know what to say?” Rose repeated what he said, as it clearly made no sense to her. “Sometimes, if you don’t know what to say, just smile. It’s what someone once told me, I think…” Rose stated, seemingly confused by her own statement.
     “You think?”
     “It’s strange…Holding a weapon like this one,” Rose lifted the sword up, looking at her reflection in the blade. “And it feels like the most natural thing in the world. My hands feel comfortable holding something like this, even when I know that it’s only designed to kill. With that feeling, there’s other memories in there, fragments of conversations. I wouldn’t have discovered that, if you hadn’t lent me this. I doubt I would have been able to fend that creature off if I’m honest.”
     “If that’s the case, then please keep it. Consider it the first part of my penance.” 
     “Penance? What do you mean by that?”
     “It means that I want to atone for everything I did while working under Finch. In fact, the only person I want to be working under now, is you.” 

     While not everyone could hear the conversation, those that could, almost fell over in disbelief at this point. This included Kurz, who finally acted, walking over to them in a maddened rage.
     “What is going on here! We’ve just been attacked by monsters because someone, Finch sent, the Finch you work for, decided to wreck the town’s protection system. Then, you think it’s a good time to try and throw yourself on her feet? We are in this mess because of you!” Kurz yelled, he felt that his anger was justified.
     “I don’t work for Finch now! My contact with him was ripped up the second he sent Eros in! I failed so I became useless to him. Maybe I want to atone though? Ever think of that! My life literally changed because of her, heck, everyone’s lives have changed because of her when you think about it! Mainly because we’re all still alive right now and not some monsters snack!” Mason’s big and loud rant caught the ears of more people, with some giving approving nods, but refusing to join in the argument.
     Kurz bit his tongue at first, Rose was the sole reason any of them were alive as they certainly couldn’t have stood against that creature themselves, not as they were, even mustering a full evacuation had proven to have taken too long. He was still angry though, angry at the position they’d found themselves in, and at Mason for not bearing enough guilt for everything that had happened in the town over the years. He found Mason’s need to atone bitter in his mouth, it had only been getting caught out first by Rose, and then by Kurz himself that had led to this change of heart. Just when he had finally found the words to say, Rose interrupted the pair.
     “Is now the time for fighting like this? The danger is still out there,” Rose cast a look back into the wastes, unsure if the the paranoid feeling she was experiencing was because of the Phantom Dawn glaring menacingly down on all of them, or if something else unseen was spying on them, waiting for it’s own chance to strike.
     “She’s right, all this talk can wait till after we get what little rest we can, and organise a safe space for people,” Mason said. “Not that anyone is going to listen to me, but I bet you can get them to see sense, Rose.” Mason turned to her just as she started to waver a little, her eyelids getting heavier and heavier. “Rose?” 
     She took one step forward, the sword falling from her hand, and then collapsed, to the shock of everyone watching…

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Next Chapter (not finished yet!)

I do apologise for the abrupt ending there, but as has often been the case lately, the chapter still had more to say but it was alresdy getting more lengthy then what I'd like for a story like this. Editing this one is going to be a pain for sure.

That's all for this week, hope everyone takes care.

Till next time...

Keep on writing.

Peter James Martin

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Wednesday, 17 September 2025

#141 Ah Meetings

Happy Blog Day Everyone

A short and sweet post for today, as these ones which end up sandwiched between two Phantom Dawn chapters end up being!

In other news, I've started slowly going back to Daemon Soul 2, nearing the end of the 2nd chapter after an onslaught of changes which I think I've added to the word count. Joy. At least from looking ahead, chapter 3 is more straight forward. I've also been casting my mind towards future plot points abd have settled upon certain things that I need to include during this draft. Why do it now? Because it'll be easier to make it work here knowing what's actually going on abd where word limit is only a *minor* concern, instead of during the last edit pass over where the word limit is the be all end all.

Can't say much about this plot point at the moment over than it involves Serena and her past. It'll also tie in with another plot line featuring her. Cypher may be the main character but Serena has got her fair share of things to do.

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Don't you just love meetings? I'm not sure Riz does though! This one turned out alright I think, a rarity for me these days! Not too much to say about this one, I think it can stand on its own quite well.

That's it for this week, got to get cracking on Phantom Dawn Chapter 15, so till next time...

Keep on writing,

Peter James Martin

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Wednesday, 10 September 2025

#140 Riz’s Story Time Part 6 + Short Diversions: Phantom Dawn Chapter 14

Happy Blog Day Everyone

Chapter 14 is here, with some surprising developments (or not, depending if you've already sussed me out already). I  can actually see the ending from here, though we're maybe four chapters away at the very least. Once it's done though, I may give short Diversions a break till the start of next year (barring any breaks it'll probably be done in November) as I really should be working on Daemon Soul 2.

Of course, there's another story arc ending today...

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz




Well, there’s another story arc ended, and yeah, that's certainly one way to end it!

Wasn't as happy with the art on this one but it gets the job done. Also its only now that I look back on it and realise the errors, like forgetting to put the sound effect for the destruction of the planet (a nice pop would have sufficed) and the fact that one half of the planet is actually miscoloured. Never mind.

Now to think on what to do next week!

Short Diversions: Phantom Dawn Chapter 14

Remember last time when I said that this chapter had to be seperated because of its length? Yeah, it happened again. While the conclusion of this fight is round the corner, I felt like this portion was big enough already. So, the last part (of this fight anyway) will drop in two weeks time. Hope you enjoy this bit though!

Phantom Dawn Chapter Index

Chapter 14

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Chapter 14: Clash at Twilight

     It was the monster who made the first move, charging towards Rose on spindly legs. She braced herself for the impact, crossing her arms and taking the full hit. The strange feeling within her had already activated, allowing her to shrug it off, and with glazed over eyes, she stared at the creature and began to push it back, wanting to take it as far out of the town as she could.
Kurz arrived in time to see this show of strength and could scarcely believe his own eyes. The way her hair had slightly lifted up at it’s ends, as if some sort of power was radiating from her, he became aware of the gulf between them. One of the smaller creatures brushed past his leg as it scuttled by, bringing back to the moment, and he knew that for all his questions, he had to act now.
     “Let’s go, people! Head to the other side of the town!” He commanded. He then started to fight past the little ones, though they let him part through their crowd all too easily. He went to those who, in their attempt to get away from the creatures, made the unwise decision to climb up whatever surface was at hand.
     “Kurz! Where’s Rose!” Neal asked as he got there, out of breath from running as fast as he had been.
     “She’s fighting that thing!” Kurz didn’t even have to gesture, as Neal turned and took sight of the massive multilegged beast. At first he didn’t even spot Rose in front of it, holding one of its legs in place. He squinted and recognised her long red hair, and that she was doing a similar pose to when she held off the other monster before. He didn’t recognise the beast though, having had the displeasure of being chased by many of the fiends that lurked in the wastes. He felt powerless, not being able to help her, but he knew he had to leave it to her. She’d already proven herself once, the town depended on her doing it again.
     “Good luck, Rose,” Neal said, alongside a silent prayer, before he started helping Kurz with getting people to safety.

     Mason heard all the commotion outside, but being locked up, he was absolutely helpless. A monster could come crashing through the wall at any moment, and he would have no escape method. If he was lucky, it would lead to a quick death, but that wasn’t the way his luck tended at the moment, if anything, he’d suffer an agonising end as some organism digested him slowly. He shuddered at the thought of it and hung his head low. Even if by some miracle he wasn’t killed in this monster attack, what would he do then? His future wasn’t amounting to much at the moment as his failure had burnt the last bridge he had with Finch.
     “I’m so screwed…” He wailed, knowing that no one was around to hear him.

     While at first it seemed like Rose and the monster had reached a stalemate, as neither was pushing the other back. Rose’s focus shifted when she heard Cecily call out again. The little monsters had effectively stopped anyone from getting to her, leaving her hanging precariously off the Heaven’s Rod. Mustering some more strength, Rose started taking slow steps forward, and pushed the monster back. It wasn’t a great distance, but it was enough to create an opening, one she exploited by lifting her arms free and running straight at the creature and delivering a mighty punch that seemed to move the creature even more. Then, turning on the spot, Rose dashed towards the child, with a speed that seemed to surpass what she’d shown off before. It took less than a second to get over to where Cecily was, even less time for Rose to take her into her arms.
     “Uhh,” Cecily started to say as she noticed Rose’s eyes. “Are you? Are you okay?” The little girl didn’t know what was going on, how could she.
     Rose said nothing, instead, she eyed Kurz who had just finished helping someone down, when with very little warning, she threw the girl through the air, causing her to collide in Kurz’s arms. The pair looked in shock at each other with their new predicament, but before either could offer any protest, the monster struck back, causing the land underneath Rose to explode as it drove four of its legs into it. Rose was sent hurtling through several buildings, and the monster headed after her. 

     Mason had still been minding his own business when she crashed through the walls, almost causing the whole structure to come crumbling down. Miraculously it held, but only just.
     “Errr, Rose?” Mason called out. He was sure he heard the old man identify her with that name earlier when he was talking to Kurz. There had been other things he could have called her, but he thought it was better to leave them to the poetry he’d been drafting in his head while he’d been idling in the cell. Seeing no immediate response, Mason’s bottom lip trembled as he shouted it this time. “Rose!”
     She bolted up right, her eyes the same as when she displayed her strength against him before, which caused Mason to shudder, as if he’d felt the pain from that encounter all over again. Still, he was relieved to see that she was okay, extremely focused but okay. With a sigh of relief, he rested on the bars, and fell forward with them as they were no longer secured in place. It made an awful noise, and when he looked up in embarrassment, Rose was staring at him 
     “I…uhh…I’ll guess you want me to stay here?” Mason asked. Rose didn’t reply, she just kept looking at him, and as he scrambled to his feet, she moved quicker, appearing next to him in a blink of an eye.
     “Wait!” 
     Without letting say anything else, Rose pushed Mason out of the way as one of the creature's legs tore through the ceiling, landing right where the big guy had been a moment before. This proved too much for the old building, and it finally collapsed, Rose leapt up on to the creature's leg as it did, becoming clear of the debris She then started running across it’s length, heading for the main body.
     Mason coughed and spluttered as he pushed off the fallen timbers that had laid on him. He didn’t know if it was dumb luck that caused him to survive or if Rose had deliberately pushed him to a point where the least amount of things would fall on him, but either way the result was the same. He thanked his lucky stars but got to see the full situation for the first time. He saw the thing that Rose was fighting against, and the sheer size of it made his knees go weak. Gulping, he spared a thought about turning the other way and running. A chorus of voices started chiming off in his head, a mix of everyone that ever looked down on him, and those who scant few who believed in him. He looked around at the destruction that was already abundant.
     “Damn it…” He thought as he ran off.

     Rose had managed to evade all attempts the creature made to get rid of her, and had now made it to the main body, where the creature looked directly at her, its eyes emerging out of its head on stalks, bending around themselves. The creature didn’t know what to make of her, but all the same, it wanted rid of her. The feeling was mutual though, and Rose put all her strength into her fist, intent on ending it all with one blow.. She reared back, then punched down hard into what she presumed was the creature’s forehead. If the hit didn’t kill it, it would have certainly made it retreat. Neither of those things happened, as instead the point where she attacked was stretchy and pliable. Her fist simply went in a little deeper, causing the monster no injury, but in the state Rose was in, she was unable to fully comprehend what had happened.
     For Neal and Kurz who had been watching afar, they both felt dread rising from the pit of their stomachs.
     “Rose! Come back!” Kurz shouted, believing that there was no fight to be hard here. He was ignored, with Rose failing to even glance back at his direction.
     “ROSE!” Neal tried this time. But even when shouting with as much force as he could manage, it simply wasn’t enough.
     “If you two are going to help, then actually help!” Mason roared, surprising both of them. He was carrying a long object, bundled up in cloth. He held it like a javelin, then, with all his might, he threw it towards Rose. “Here!” he shouted at her. “You look like you could use this better than I could!” 
     “What are you doing out here!” Kurz demanded to know, forgetting the situation for a moment. “What was that you’re throwing at her! She’s trying to save all our asses!”
     “Yeah, I know that, which is why I’m doing something to help!”
     As they were arguing, the bundle of cloth sped towards Rose, losing some of the rags covering it as it did, revealing the handle of some kind of weapon. It was ornate to the point of being stylised. The rest of the weapon matched that of a sword, except the blade ever so slightly curved.
     “A sword?” Kurz said back to himself. “Where did you get that from?” 
     “My house. That was Finch’s first ever gift to me. It made sense to me that someone needed it more than I did.” Mason admitted.
     Rose caught the sword with a sign of brilliant reflexes, and immediately wielded it like someone who’d grown up around such weapons. The first thing she did with the bladed weapon was to cut some of the eye stalks off when they neared her again, and to deliver a nasty looking cut to the creature where she was standing. The monster convulsed and let out a horrible shriek. In its mad throes, it was able to shake Rose off it, and she rolled along the floor, ending up in a kneeling position, finding herself standing between the town and the monster once again, but this time, with a new advantage. She stood ready to meet the monster’s next charge…

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A little bit of a cliffhanger there, I know but you'll get the conclusion soon!

That's it for this week, so till next time...

Keep on writing

Peter James Martin

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Wednesday, 3 September 2025

#139 Riz’s Story Time Part 5

Happy Blog Day Everyone

A short one this week as I prepare the next chapter of Phantom Dawn (aka the rest of it that got split off from last week's installment). From a certain point of view there's a flaw in play about it, namely that it's a chapter dedicated to one single fight. While I've done this several times, I'm also aware of my short comings with doing this. I'm trying to get better with it, but please bear that in mind.

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The penultimate Chapter is here (Yes, that means I've thought of a way that ends this in three more panels)!

Gallows mech may seem a little familiar to those with passing knowledge to a certain Japanese multimedia juggernaut (starts with G, ends with M). Ironically it wasn’t meant to when I thought up what was going on but it sorta happened, as these things often do. Other details won't line up of course but tue inspiration is clear.

Will Gallows get his revenge for last week? Will Little Red Riding Bren get to Grandma's for whatever reason she was going in the first place?
Will Riz regain control of the narrative at all?

Find out in the final part next week!

Speaking of...that's it for now!

Till next time...

Keep on writing

Peter James Martin

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