The Strange Tales of Peter James Martin
Wednesday, 30 April 2025
#121 Never Fails + Daemon Soul 2 Sneak Peak
Wednesday, 23 April 2025
#120 Never Fails + Short Diversions: Phantom Dawn Chapter 7
Happy Blog Day Everyone!
Today, I have the 8th Chapter of Phantom Dawn for your reading pleasure, and the bad guy finally makes his presence known!
Before we get to that though, let's see what Brennan and Riz are up to!
The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz
You just know that this has happened several times, it's such a Riz move. Also noticed that it's the 120th issue, can't believe that I'm still making them, can I make it to the coveted 150?
(Silly question as I'll hit that around December!)
Minor Update
Not much to say here, the ending of Avalon drags on but that's down to too little writing time (I think I've said this before, but I effectively lose two days to preparing the comic strip and writing this blog. School Holidays make finding time a real pain).
Still hoping to get it finished, one of the two fights has a path to an ending, and so should the other, but I'm very concerned other it feeling anticlimactic. If I can gather the words, it's certainly a blog topic as I'm pretty sure all my problem's here are self-inflicted.
Wish me luck to actually get this done.
Short Diversions: Phantom Dawn- Memories of a Rose
The story continues on! Definitely getting a feel about these characters and where this plot is heading (should specify, I know roughly the end point, but never the full path there. Yes, I'm pantsing this, can you tell?). People who remember the comic will find one forthcoming element familiar (not this chapter, but seeds are being planted).
Phantom Dawn Chapter Index
Chapter 7
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Chapter 7: Finch’s Response
Mason dragged himself through the door to his hideout, his fellows mocking laughter still ringing in his ears over his defeat to a girl. In comparison to most other homes in the area, his place was in far better condition. While still running down, things appeared to be unbroken and a symbol of some wealth, that Finch was actually looking out for those in his service. He was the only person there, or so he thought at least.
Nominally, there would have been five of them sharing the house, just one of many buildings dotted around in Finch’s domain, he clustered his men, and they were always men, together in case they were needed. Mason was glad that he was alone, if anyone else had been there, he would have had some awkward questions that he would have had to answer. He let himself flop onto the sofa, letting out a heavy sigh. Thinking about what had just transpired, he was at a loss for words.
That red haired girl! That vision of beauty! What monstrous strength! How? He asked himself. His body was aching, and he was under no illusion that the beating he received was the worst he could have gotten. At the same time though, she could have easily killed him, that was the impression he had, the girl was holding back to not beat him into a bloody pulp. He turned to face the ceiling, wishing he had drank more at the bar, at least then he could have blamed that. One silver lining he could think of, was that any news would take a while to reach Finch, giving him time to think of a reasonable explanation, and to get back at them. He estimated that he had a good few hours, and that would be enough to round up some men, get them kitted out, and get rid of them, one way or another. He’d prefer the easy if he was honest. Still, he’d have a nap, and then get the ball rolling. He closed his eyes, wanting sleep to fall over him, but a knock on the door caused him to bold upright from the sofa, pain striking through his body as parts moved more than they should have after the beating. There was another knock, and then another.
Only Finch knocked like that.
“You going to let me in Mason? It’s not nice to leave a guy outside like this, especially with the Phantom Dawn out.” Finch’s voice sounded as confident as ever. He knew that Mason was going to let him in.
Mason wavered as he inched towards the door. He tried to remain calm, chalking his appearance up to a coincidence rather than anything else, after all, any message would have taken hours to get to Finch, and then added time for him to get here. Thus, it was only reasonable to assume that his benefactor had absolutely no idea about his humiliating defeat. With his confidence restored, even if just by a little, Mason gladly opened the door to see his boss standing there smiling.
“I was beginning to think that you were going to keep me out there!” Finch laughed, patting Mason on the back as he swaggered in. Finch was a man of average height, in his fifties. His grey hair was slicked back, with a flat cap hiding where he was balding, he had a toothpick in his mouth which he messed with every now and again. His jacket was worn like a cape, its arms tied around his neck, allowing it to blow in the breeze, not unlike a cape. Behind him, there were two hulking figures standing there, they made no effort to come in alongside Finch, Mason shuddered looking at them, he was a big fella, but these two were in a league above him.
“Hi, guys?” Mason made an attempt to appear jovial to them, but they didn’t make any sound, they never did. They were Finch’s bodyguards, and no one had even gotten close to Finch with ill intent as long as they were there. Those that tried, well, Mason had often tried to scrub the memories of witnessing such attempts. Leaving them outside, Mason shut the door, trying to hide his fear. Finch had already moved to the sofa, taking up practically the whole thing as he spread his arms and legs out, making it difficult for anyone else to take a seat there.
“So, what brings you out here?” Mason asked.
“Just doing the rounds, nothing important. I was in the next town over, and I thought to myself, ‘I should check in on Mason’, see how operations are here. I noticed there was a bit of a wobble in the money coming in from here, even after I raised the levy to live in such a nice place.”
“I think that’s people moving out of town?” Mason answered earnestly. There was a warning siren blaring in his head after he said it, realising that was the wrong thing to say.
“You don’t say? And what are you doing to make sure that doesn’t happen? I mean, have you put that man out of business yet? The one who is directly facilitating that?”
Such a pointed question put Mason on edge again.
Did he know? No, how could he? Mason's panicked thoughts raced through his head.
“I’m-I’m trying!” Mason stammered. “They’re resourceful though! I kick them out of one place, and they just turn up elsewhere! But, I assure you, things are on the up!” Mason slammed his fist into his palm, trying to emphasise a point he had no right in making.
“Oh, that’s a relief then. I know I can count on you, I mean, I know, that you know, what failing me means. I don’t want to have to ‘fire’ you, not after everything I’ve done for you.” Here, ‘Fire’ was a euphemism and a literal expression, anyone that failed Finch, was lit up on a bonfire, for all the other employees to see.
“Haha,” Mason laughed nervously, wanting to steer the conversation away from the topic now, especially since he was going to have to ask for permission for a couple more resources to scare Neal and his group away, but Finch still had something let to ask.
“By the way, were you at the bar this morning?”
Mason’s blood froze solid, almost making it impossible for him to move, leaving him wearing a shocked expression.
“Err…” He forced the words out, but those weren’t the ones that he wanted to say.
Like a shark tasting blood in the water, Finch leaned forward.
“Hey, it’s okay. I don’t care if you’re drinking that early! It’s only a problem if you’re not getting the job done,” he sounded reassuring, which worked as Mason relented.
“Yeah, I was there this morning…”
“See? I don’t care!” Finch laughed, and Mason let out a scared laugh, noting how his boss was skirting close to the truth about what happened.
“Though what I do care about…” Finch’s tone changed in an instant. “Is you making a public display of getting your arse handed to you by a girl.”
There it was, and in that moment, Mason wished he was a hundred thousand miles away, in a different town, in a different body, as a completely different species if he could.
“Look! I can explain!” Mason started to sweat, as Finch sat there unmoved by his underlings plight.
“You can explain why Neal’s new friend was able to toss you around? How she proved to everyone watching that you are a weakling, and by extension, that I’m a weakling for relying on you? Which in turn shows me why you haven’t been able to handle the simple task I gave you?” Finch sounded more and more aggressive as his questioning continued.
“How did you even know about that? There’s no way that anyone could have told you!”
“I saw it myself! I had not long arrived, and I was standing at the end of the street. I hung back when I realised what was going on, and stayed in the shadows. I expected to see you beat Neal’s brat but that isn’t what happened is it? I overheard everyone talking afterwards, the jokes they made, and I felt my authority slip. I don’t like that.” Finch put his hands together, and made it look like he was thinking. “You know what happens when I don’t like something.”
“Please, just give me one more chance! I’ll get this town to step back into line! That girl! She’s not normal!” Mason pleaded.
“No, I think…Yeah, I think this town needs a refresh, a new start.”
“What do you mean by that?”
“Well, this town is absolute crap. You let all the good people flee from my grasp. There’s nothing left of any worth. So, we need to start again. Wipe the slate clean.”
“I still don’t understand…”
“Do I need to speak plainer? I’m going to wipe this town from the face of the earth. Then, I’m going to build something new atop of it, and fill it with people who actually listen to me and do as they’re goddamn told!” Finch stood, and straightened himself out. “You want to stay on my goodside, you’ll make sure that this happens. I’ll find another opportunity for you to make up for all your failures. Now, I’m going to leave and get things ready. I’ll send word for when it’s time for you to leave. Till then, make sure no one leaves, got it?”
“O-okay,” Mason said, looking down at the ground. He didn’t want to face Finch, who was revelling in the power dynamic at play.
“I don’t care how strong this girl is, what I’ve got planned, she’ll die like the rest.”
“L-like the rest?”
“Can’t make an omelette without breaking a few eggs. The townspeople are no big loss, They’ve paid me well enough, but now they’ve seen you fail, they’ll probably start getting ideas of their own. I can’t have that now.” Finch walked back over to the door. “Remember. Us? We’re hanging on by a thread. You want to repair that, you have to behave, and listen like the good boy you are,” Finch playfully tapped Mason on the cheek, making it clear that any bad behaviour would not be tolerated. “Bye kid.” Finch left, in the company of his bodyguards, a dozen plans already running through his mind.
Mason, stared out of the door, and at the town itself, and he began to panic, fretting over everything that was happening. He couldn’t let the town be destroyed. He had to find a way to appease Finch, and keep the town as it was. He didn’t know what his employer had planned, but he wouldn’t let it take place. If he could get rid of Finch’s problem within th town, then there wouldn’t be any need to get rid of the town. Mason knew he was going to have to act fast…
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Next Chapter (Not finished yet!).
That's it for this week!
Till next time...
Keep on writing!
Peter James Martin
Quick Links
Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Volume 1
Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Fade to Noir
Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Hubble Bubble
Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Ominous Orbs
Daemon Soul Awakening- Amazon, books2read.
Wednesday, 16 April 2025
#119 Don’t You Hate That + Future of Daemon Soul
Happy Blog Day Everyone!
This week I want to look at what the future holds for Daemon Soul now that it's been released, there's also a brand new Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz to entertain you, so let's head over and see what the pair are up to.
The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz
Looks like a pretty good dream Riz was having there! Also one I could actually show you without the authorities trying to get in contact. This issue came out a lot better than I was dreading, though I need to find a better way to take the final photo. The reason the panel lines look so wonky is because of the angle I take the photo at. If only I had a scanner.
Future of Daemon Soul
So hopefully everyone is reading/ has read Daemon Soul Awakening by now (get it here and here if you haven't!), and may be thinking to themselves, now what?
Well...now you wait.
Okay, that sounds harsh but you wait because book 2 is (hopefully) on the way!
Of course, this is a completely redone book 2 then the original sequel I wrote from 2007 to 2008, my life might have been easier if I had just edited that one (which probably wouldn't have worked thinking about it, as even Awakening got redrafted basically).
My original plan was to have five books (Awakening, Requiem, Corruption, Dead World, Curse of Destiny) which quickly got cut back to four (the last one was dropped, with book 4 gaining a little extra to end the whole thing). Essentially each book was to focus on one of the four Arc Demons, treating each like the final boss of a video game (though as it turned out when writing the books, each successive one got better characterisation with one in particular affecting the future rewrites even now). Of course Gabriel featured heavily through out all this, his role changing in the early planning of Requiem (he was supposed to die then, if you can believe that!) with a major reveal happening in Corruption. No, I will not say what that reveal was, I'm still planning on using that.
Now, I've drafted a new plan with regards to how Daemon Soul will move forward, and Daemon Soul Avalon is a big part of that. This represents something that was missing from the first version of the sequels, Cypher’s steps into the world having consequences as others react to him. This is also where he meets the white haired woman, whom I shared a picture of last week. That woman is, of course, Isabelle Blake, who regular readers will remember from a few short stories I've written on the blog (ones you can read via the list I shared last week).
Want another picture of her?
That's all for this week!
Till next time...
Keep on writing!
Peter James Martin
Quick Links
Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Volume 1
Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Fade to Noir
Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Hubble Bubble
Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Ominous Orbs
Daemon Soul Awakening- Amazon