Wednesday, 25 June 2025

#129 He Has A Lot

Happy Blog Day Everyone.

Still no normal service...yet.

The ending of Daemon Soul 2 continues to elude me but I'm making decent headway with it as more characters are showing me just who they are.

I've also had inspiration strike me at the most random of times, and while I need to discuss it with my editor, it could solve a bunch of my issues with the second book and lead to an interesting dynamic for the third. Of course, it'll lead to more edits that are needed for the last chapters to make sense but thats about par for the course now. The other inspiration is a bit trickier to describe as it involves various loose threads in my head, and is more about future developments, other than providing Cypher an interesting mirror (to go alongside the other, more twisted mirror that Void holds up to him). To boil it down, the character re-purposes an existing one (okay, he's never appeared in writing and was in a RPG Maker game I was tinkering with ages ago, and a tabletop rpg I was doing.), taking him from the existing archetype and transplanting him wholesale, but losing a certain aspect (promise I'll explain better when the character is in print). I'm in two minds about his name, leaning towards keeping it, and having him absolutely hate it.

In either case, these will inserted into the manuscript after its finished, and I'll fight the urge to make changes now because that'll just bog me down even further.

In other news, I'm hoping to make time to continue Phantom Dawn this week (though, given what I said about Daemon Soul 2 just above, take this with a pinch of salt), I need to make time for it again.

Before I sign off for the week, let's see what Brennan and Riz are up to...

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz



Hmmm, I think I needed longer to really get that joke perfect. The original idea was that Riz thought his cheese was in the box but ultimately, Brennan would reveal it was on the side in the kitchen. Fearing that I'd not gotten that across (I hadn't), I changed it to just being the bread in the box, and Brennan reduced to complaining about Riz leaving the cheese out. The joke had well and truly fallen flat.

Next week's is issue 130 though, and if I can pull it off, it should be a fun one indeed.

That's it for now,

Till next time,

Keep on writing.

Peter James Martin

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Wednesday, 18 June 2025

#128 Just Checking

Happy Blog Day Everyone

I think everyone is familiar with the drill by now. There's no Phantom Dawn this week, but as I'm feeling a little bit better, I'm hoping that it'll start up again in a fortnights time, jumping back in to the fight between Kurz and Mason (which started here). 

Whilst I'm still not writing as much as I would like, I'm getting things done and a recent part I've been working on has meant that I had to take a character back to the drawing board slightly to figure out how her powers actually worked. I'd had an idea in my head for them, allowing me to write scenes where she'd looked the part, but the actual mechanics weren't there. If I had just left as is then her powers were incredibly broken and over powered.

The character in question is one Lady Morgana, who, simply put, could make things explode. My rationale at first was that she was doing something with the oxygen in the air, and already you should see the problems with such a power, seeing as we need oxygen to live and that it gets carried around our bodies by our blood. If left, she could literally blow people up without them even knowing what was coming. This works fine at a distance, and can be seen as intimidating to other characters but I need her to be more than that (especially in the future, which is why it's so important to get this right now). The fights would end up very one-sided leaving me to have to show my hand quite aggressively in order to do it properly. I know there's merit in using it to create dramatic tension ("oh snap, how is so-and-so going to survive this!") But the victory has to be somewhat believable otherwise you get things like: "Why didn't she kill him as soon as he opened his mouth? How is this a challenge?". My aim is more to create fights like that seen in the JoJo's Bizarre Adventures manga and anime series, where the author often comes up with ingenious ways to end fights. If I accomplish that remains to be seen, as the character in question will be stepping into the limelight in future books and is only getting started here. 

As it stands, work on Daemon Soul 2 continues apace and all thats left to do is wrapping up stuff...and edits, oh God the edits are going to break me.

Things have seemingly turned around this week in order of content, so let's finish up with everyone's favourite duo.


The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz


Originally this strip was supposed to be called Chances Are a Million to One (why yes, I have been listening to Jeff Waynes Musical War of the World, how can you tell?), sadly I couldn't back it up within the strip so that's how you ended up with this!

Not sure what the bigger question is though, the fact there's life on Mars or how Riz borrowed money from them...

That's all for this week.

Till next time,

Keep on writing.

Peter James Martin

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Wednesday, 11 June 2025

#127 Almost Worked

Happy Blog Day Everyone

Not much to talk about again today, but it's not all doom and gloom. I've actually gotten more words down for Daemon Soul 2, which included finally finishing up the chapter thst had been feeling like a slog. I've said this before but it should feel like downhill from here in terms of actually finishing it as now is the point of tying up plot threads (the ones that need it) and laying down fresh hooks for story number 3. The word count currently sits 10k over where I want it, which is a bit concerning, as unlike Daemon Soul 1, there isn't any obvious cuts that could be done. Of course I say that but there is some passages that I'm currently looking at and questioning their worth. Untangling things though make it a tricky proposition to straight up remove. Annoying thing as well is that I still have bits I need to add based on notes I made previously.

Will I be able to get this done?

Time will tell.

My mood is shifting slightly because of this, but it's still early days.

Enough talk though, time to see what Brennan and Riz are doing.

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz


First up, sorry about the mistake on the border of the first panel, my finger slipped while inking.

Secondly, I had this idea kicking atojnd my head about Riz trying to send himself places in order to save travel expenses. In fact there was even a line of dialogue cut from this strip expressing that. The idea did raise questions, such as how would he get the box sealed, given Brennan would only help so far. Hence why this strip was designed the way it was. It was a stupid idea for Riz really. Thinking about it, he'd have more luck hiding in someone's luggage, assuming they were going his way of course.

Fun fact: Normally I use the comic stripes full title for the name of the blog, but this is the firsf time I've shortened it. Why? I wasn't sure how the brackets would go as sometimes their inclusion can make things go a bit screwy.

That's all for this week. Hopefully I can keep some momentum going on my writing and fully turn the corner. I'll keep you all updated.

Thank you and till next time.

Keep on writing.

Peter James Martin

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Wednesday, 4 June 2025

#126 A Bit Dramatic

Happy Blog Day Everyone!

Yes, as you may have guessed, there's no Phantom Dawn this week, breaking a long running tradition (in the sense that I hadn't missed a chapter upload since I started doing it back in January, prologue not withstanding as that was actually already written). I think I explained it last week, but to quickly recap, I'm not in the best place at the moment, and haven't touched a word document since I uploaded the last chapter of Phantom Dawn.

I am trying to ease myself back in, but only a few hundred words, if that. I'll let you all know next week how this goes. I'm unsure if it'll help but hopefully Phantom Dawn will only be on hiatus for these next couple of weeks.

Of course, you still get a new Comic of course (quality not assured).

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz


I think we all know someone like this...It should come as no surprise that Riz is a complete drama queen. Don't think it came out too badly (for my standards anyway).

Sadly, that's it for this week.

Sorry for another content lite post, but that's just how it goes I guess.

Till next time,

Keep on writing.

Peter James Martin

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Wednesday, 28 May 2025

#125 Time To Go

Happy Blog Day Everyone


Really not a lot to say today so it's pretty much just the comic and that's it. I think I've fallen into a bad place mentally and it's affected my output. It takes a lot to just do my dailies on social media and the weekly comic. Whether I've flown to close to the sun with what I was putting on myself, or in the same vein, I burned myself out. The result is the same. 

I've been like this before though and sunk to darker depths, but I think I may need to just get out of my own head.


With all that said, there may be no new chapter of Phantom Dawn next week. I can't promise something like that given how I'm feeling. I'd settle for feeling like my old self again.

With that said, here's Brennan and Riz.

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz


This is the end of the beach theme, for now at least. I reserve the right to do more if the summer holiday provides more inspiration. Next week though, not doubt we'll get a new setting...or at least their office again.

As I said above, that's pretty much it for this week.

Till next time (and hopefully a better time).

Keep on writing

Peter James Martin

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Wednesday, 21 May 2025

#124 Probably Too Far + Short Diversions: Phantom Dawn Chapter 9

Happy Blog Day Everyone!

Chapter 9 of Phantom Dawn is here for your reading pleasure! Though sadly there hasn't been much movement anywhere else writing wise. Definitely won't seeing the end of the challenge I'm afraid, just the way it goes I suppose.

I did manage a new Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz, so there that's at least, speaking of them...

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz



Yup, the beach theme continues. Mulling over different ideas, the thought of Riz digging up Cthulhu was too amusing to pass by (yes I know he wouldn't be underground on a random beach, but creative licence and all that. Is there more to wring out of this theme? Guess you'll just have to wait and see next week!

Short Diversions: Phantom Dawn Memories of a Rose Chapter 9

Kurz and Rose are racing back to their hideout, but what will await them there, read on to find out!

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Chapter 9

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Chapter 9: Kurz's Resolve

     Kurz and Rose were running as fast as they could, with Rose not fully understanding the urgency. The sounds had been disturbing, their harshness breaking the quietness of the town, but she knew no meaning behind it. Kurz, on the other hand, knew it all too well. The sound had been unmistakable to him, that of a motorcar, a breed of vehicle that only the rich and powerful could afford. The sound of one here meant one thing only, Finch was on the move.
     I'm not going to let you lay a finger on him! Kurz swore to himself. His mind started to envision what scene he'd find when the pair arrived, what weapons they'd find deployed against them. It was no secret that Finch paid special attention to collecting weapons from before the Fall. Any cache that was found, even if it was just the bullets that went in them, Finch made sure it ended up with him
     No smoke yet, that's something Kurz eyed the skyline. He risked a look back at Rose who was keeping up with him and making it look easy. He quickly looked forward again, the shock still written on his face. Despite the severity of the situation, fresh questions fought their way to the surface. Most prominent being what she was. He'd heard of people being affected by the Phantom Dawn before but they'd rarely remained human, and those that did, didn't do so for long.
     Any more thoughts were silenced by the sound of gunfire ahead, a frenzied horrible noise that cut deep through Kurz.
     “What was that?” Rose asked. The noise had shaken her as well but in a different manner, it had shaken something loose in her head, a thought that the sound did indeed belong to something bad. Something she lacked a name for currently.
     “Bad news…” Kurz answered without missing a beat, then an item caught his eye, and he stopped suddenly.
     “Why are we stopping?” Rose looked around to see if she could spot whatever item had caught Kurz’s attention, but failed to find anything. At least, nothing obvious.
     “Just saw something that will come in handy.” Kurz picked up a length of rope that had been discarded round the back of a shabby dwelling. He flexed it a couple of times, making sure that it had the strength he needed.
     “Not too far now,” Kurz announced as he started running again, the rope now wrapped around his right hand. Rose followed suit, still wondering what good the rope was going to be for them. She didn’t bother to verbalise this though, preferring to keep the matter focused on getting to Neal before anything bad happened.

     To Kurz’s relief, it wouldn’t be long before they found themselves back at hideout, where a throng of people were now gathered, keeping themselves at arm’s length and away from the other group of people who were there.
     Rose recognised one of them, being Mason, and that he’d been standing at the rear, letting five men head of him. She couldn’t see the faces on these individuals, as they were all obscured by helmets. Unlike Mason, who seemed to be wearing the exact same clothes as earlier, these people were wearing armour, giving them a much more heavy duty look. They were all armed with a weapon that Rose’s head tried to make her remember what it was. It was this fragment of a memory that told her that the terrible sound that her and Kurz had just heard belonged to these weapons. To prove her correct, one of the men fired it again, aiming it upwards. It sounded even worse now that they were closer. Next to them all, was a strange contraption with four wheels that looked as if it would collapse at any moment. One part covered over, the rest was long and open to the elements.
     “Mason! You coward! So upset about before that you’d stoop this low!” Kurz shouted at the top of his lungs, wanting to make sure that everyone within earshot could hear him.
     On hearing this, Mason turned with a smile that spelt out his intentions there.
     “So, you decided to show yourself then? Saved me a job, though if you two are out here. Guess that means it’s just the old man and that drunken idiot of a friend you have in there? Am I right?” 
     “Maybe, or maybe you’re just parading about in front of an empty building wasting everyone’s time. Wouldn’t that be funny.” Kurz replied, slowly advancing towards where Mason was. Rose followed behind, on edge because of the fragmented memories that were telling her to tread lightly.
     “If it’s empty, then you won’t mind if me and my friends use it for a bit of target practise? The building is an eyesore I think you’ll agree.”
     “The only eyesore around here, is you Mason!” Kurz snapped.
     “Big words for someone without a gun. Me? I’’ve got five of them! And if you take all your worthless friends and get out of here, then I may be nice and not use them on you. How does that sound? Isn’t that nice of me?” Mason smiled, making it seem like he was offering a fantastic deal.
     “I’ve got a counter offer. You and those losers you’re with can bugger off back to Finch. You do that, and we won’t have to repeat the humiliation you suffered earlier. Isn’t that nice of me?” Kurz threw Mason’s words right back at him. “I mean, you’ve already had a taste of what she can do, and this time, I’m prepared for you.” Kurz flexed the rope around his hand again, pulling it tight. “I think it’s an even better deal personally.” 
     Mason narrowed his eyes at the pair. On the one hand, the goddess of beauty had returned, and even knowing what she was capable of, he couldn’t help but fall for her charms once more. On the other, Kurz was mouthing off, acting as if a rope was enough to hold off some of the finest guns that Finch had acquired.
     “Pretty big talk if you ask me,” Mason muttered. “But if you really want to test yourself, come on down. One way or another, you guys are out of here.” Mason snapped his fingers, and the other men turned their sights away from the hideout, and onto Kurz and Rose.
     “Don’t worry,” Kurz said to Rose. “I’ve got this…”
     Before Rose could even object to what seemed like a suicidal plan, Kurz marched forward to meet Mason and his men, head on….

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Next Chapter (not finished yet!)

That's all for this week, hopefully I'll actually get something done to show next time...

Till then.

Keep on writing

Thanks

Peter James Martin

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Wednesday, 14 May 2025

#123 Beach Bully + Current Thoughts

Happy Blog Day Everyone!

A other in-between week here, writing is continuing apace on Chapter 9 of Phantom Dawn. I want to talk a little about where I'm at currently with things but first, let's drop in on that particular duo...

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz


Thought a beach strip was in order (though on day of posting, the weather has turned bad again, c'est la vie). The third panel didnt really turn out as I had envisioned in my head but it was fun to experiment at least. Is there any additional milage to get out of this setting? We'll see next week, might be key to getting the good weather again!

Current Thoughts

So, sad to say this isn't going to be a positive post. If you cast your minds back to January, I set myself a writing challenge to get the first draft of Daemon Soul 2 completed and polished. I finished the first part of the challenge (90k by end of February) but hit a major wall, the story wasn't actually completed. I checked my notes and it didn't seem like it would need much more work, three chapters at most. Easy peasy in three months right? Right?

I don't think I need to tell you what happened.

My writing confidence took a major hit, but i wouldn't say that it's solely because I (clearly) failed my challenge. No, I'd say it's partly due to my own low mood, waking up and feeling like a failure in a lot of areas. So far it's only affected Phantom Dawn in the sense that I don't get anything done till the night before I post these blogs, often staying up way later than I should. My lack of time management isn't helping at all which I guess should come as no surprise.

What's next then? Is there any ray of light on the horizon? Any bright spot that could turn this all around?

Probably not, no.

I'll continue on, as I always have done with these moods, all I feel like doing at the minute.

on that downer of a note, I think we'll leave it there for this week. I realise that there is little to no good news these past couple of weeks but that's life I guess.

Till next time...

Keep on writing.

Peter James Martin

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