Wednesday 31 January 2024

#56 Not The Time + Short Diversion: The Cockpit

 Happy Blog Day Everyone!


This week, I'm debuting a new semi-regular feature. Short Diversions. This will be were I post some Short fiction. It might be related to one of my other works, or it might just be something that popped into my head on Sunday evening. I'll explain more about the first piece, The Cockpit, below but this won't be a weekly thing. I'd love to aim for fortnightly, but I've also got a lot going on. You will see this feature again though, mark my words.


Before all that though, let's see what Brennan and Riz have gotten up too this past week...

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz



This was a strip I struggled with, the drawing side at least. I knew exactly what I wanted to happen the moment I has the idea, it was just getting it down on paper. I had to rework all of it several times before it got to this point, and even then (as always) I'm not thrilled with it.

Short Diversions: The Cockpit

I promised more original short story content, and starting today, I'm delivering it!

This feature will hopefully be more frequent than a one shot but probably shouldn't be expected more than twice in a month...if I manage that!

First up, we're going to take a trip back to the world of Vector Unit Regen: Orphan War. I've spoken about this series a couple of times, most notably here. A brief recap, Orphans War, is set on a future earth, a blasted to hell and back earth. Those who can, live in the domes for protection and a better life. Those who can't, struggle in the lawless wastes. This is where our main characters enter the scene, Drake and Ava Vern, a pair of "Silvers" (a term used because all of those born outside the domes have silver eyes, marking them out). 

This short is set after Drake has made the dark decision to join the Atlantis Empire in order for Ava to receive medical treatment...

Ladies and Gentlemen, I present to you,

The Cockpit

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It was quiet, aside from the low hum of the computers and Drake’s own breathing. his vision focused on the blank screen in front of him. The whole environment closed in on him, being as restrictive as the collar they’d clamped around his neck. A measure, they claimed, to continually check his vitals for any irregularities, but Drake knew that its purpose was to ensure his obedience. When they looked at him, they only saw a disposable soldier, a slave, all because of the colour of his eyes. Still, he told himself that he had to endure it, he had to play along with their games, all for the health of his sister. He needed their advanced medical knowledge to heal her. 


Trying to control his breathing while waiting for the inevitable call to action, he turned the best he could, taking in what he could see of the cockpit. There were a myriad of buttons. Some of them were switches, others levels. He had no idea what they did, their instructions of the exercise boiled down to: “We’ll tell you what to push when.” The approach designed to make sure orders were followed to the latter. A form of brainwashing if repeated enough, which they did with abandon. The silver scum, as they saw them, having free will , needed to be stomped out. 


Staring at the buttons on his right, he tried to figure out their functions, wanting to kill some of the time, and he was positive that the waiting was on purpose as well. The last time they had done an exercise like this, they’d kept him in there for almost an entire day without any food or drink. If they were testing his endurance, he’d have preferred them to tell him that up front, at least he knew what he was up against. Closing his eyes, he focused on the hum of the machinery, his ‘shifting attention’ a strategy of his to avoid losing himself to the deprivation of senses that this exercise inflicted.


A burst of static came across the radio, being fed straight into his helmet.

“Silver zero zero seven nine, did you copy me?” a cold female voice spoke, as a trainer to a pet. It made Drake’s skin crawl, that number was repeated to him day and night. There was a promise of a time when it would cease, but that would be the day that he proved his worth to them, and his unwavering allegiance, like so many of his cohorts had done in the past. Drake involuntarily shuddered at that thought, though he lacked the power to change that currently..

“I copy you. Am I to start the session?” Drake replied, matching the cold tone of the operator. He saw no need to reply any differently. They didn’t see him as a person after all.

“Not yet,” came the blunt reply. “There’s been an issue and your session has been delayed again. Hold your position and await further instructions.” 

Hold your position. An odd command to give when he didn’t have any control unless they gave him it. He wondered what had happened, what this issue was. He had theories, but with his cameras switched off, he couldn’t confirm anything. The last time this happened, one less trainee sat at their table for their meagre meals.


With nothing else to do, Drake allowed himself to daydream. He thought of the life before, well before his sister’s illness, even further back to before their parents died. That had been a world away from the steel coffin he found himself encased in. Another radio call interrupted his reverie, bringing back to his bleak present.

“Issue has been taken care of, you may began the session Silver Zero Zero Seven Nine.”

All the systems around him stirred into life at the behest of an external master, the camera ahead of him booted him up, giving him a look at the hangar where his machine had been stood. Drake took a deep breath and then repeated the response they’d wanted to hear.

“Silver Zero Zero Seven Nine, heading out.” 

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There you have it folks, hope you all enjoyed that!

Till next time,

Keep on writing!

Peter James Martin

Quick Links

The Strange Tales of Brennan and Riz Volume 1

The Strange Tales of Brennan and Riz Book 1: A Boy and A Rat

The Strange Tales of Brennan and Riz Volume 2

Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Volume 1

Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Fade to Noir

Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Hubble Bubble

Harvey Duckman Presents Volume 13




Wednesday 24 January 2024

#55 Weather Warning + Update

 Happy Blog Day Everyone!

A quick one today as I'm up to my nose in some real life business (can't say at the moment, but clearly non-fiction letter writing isn't my forte). Still, let's see what Brennan and Riz have in store for us this week!

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz


This is why Brennan should never have let Riz keep that kit. It was only ever going to end in tears. Most weeks, I'm going backward and forwards over Comic strip ideas, often when I'm supposed to be doing other things, this time however, my wife says one thing to me and the bulb goes on.

Wasn't happy with the artwork in this one though, not quite sure what happened but that middle panel is one of the jankiest ones I've done since starting the Comic. As always, I'll try better next week.

Update

So, as I said back up top, I've not done much actual fiction writing this week, aside from trying to do a new plan for the first Avalon Tales novella...and immediately redoing it. I think part of my problem is that I'm trying to shove too much in, a novel's content into a much more restricted word count. What I've been trying to do is simplify the narrative, allowing me to get to the characters.

I think I am getting somewhere now, I've spread out some plot points into the planned other novellas (hopefully not upsetting them too much...but then I can sort that when it comes to it.) I've still got faith in Isabelle and Robyn, that the pair will be introduced into the wide world. In fact, I plan on doing some short pieces featuring them for this blog, so watch this space.

From one dynamic pair to a dysfunctional one. Brennan and Riz. While not actively writing anything for them, the pair are in my thoughts in some form. Some of these thoughts revolve the Brennan and Riz stories that were never finished, case in point the story I started here: Pandemic Blues written during the lockdown before this blog went on hiatus. Would anyone be interested in an ending to that series? Not sure on the best approach to it being published mind as its really different stories than one overarching narrative. Still, if people want an ending I'll give it to them.

That's all for now, as my other duties call. Hope to get more writing done soon but till then....

Keep on writing yourselves.

Peter James Martin

Quick Links

The Strange Tales of Brennan and Riz Volume 1

The Strange Tales of Brennan and Riz Book 1: A Boy and A Rat

The Strange Tales of Brennan and Riz Volume 2

Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Volume 1

Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Fade to Noir

Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Hubble Bubble

Harvey Duckman Presents Volume 13

Wednesday 17 January 2024

#54 Snow Day + Things We Forget

 Happy Blog Day Everyone!

Today's topic is an odd one to be sure, and, as usual, a massive blunder on my part (insert the sweat drop emoji here). Before we get to that though, let's check in with the Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz!

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz

Who doesn't love a snow day (aside from those who have to work/drive in it as I'm so told). Seems Riz gets a bit too carried away! Hope Brennan has a portable heater handy.

To be fair, I did have a different idea for this week, but with the impending forecast of snow that was due (and turned out to be a very light shower) this seemed more fun.

Things We Forget

So, this week, I was taking part in #7DayTale over on Twitter (X) and I got to the part where I got to post a snippet of the Work in Progress I was working on (Avalon Tales)

Here is the piece in question:


Nothing out of the ordinary eh?

Wrong.

You, see, despite going over this numerous times in November there was a detail that I'd completely overlooked as I rushed off to try and get the manuscript finished. That detail was Isabelle’s dear grandma.

You might think: That's not a big deal right? Well, the problem is that I made the character so important to Isabelle at this junction, heck, following the thread I set up, she would have spent more time with her grandma than her own father (explaining their estrangement that I was aiming for at the beginning of the novella). She would have been the guiding light for the young girl. I even remembered that I'd set the grandmother up as a former member of Avalon herself (there was a hereditary theme in how you could end up being in the organisation, just as how noble families children wound up becoming knights in medieval times). While I can't access the original notes I made, I believe this was where Isabelle was going to get a lot of her information about Avalon from.

So what happened then? How can a character be introduced as a seemingly main player (well, main support, but you get the idea) and then just disappear without much notice? Because I'm an idiot who completely forgot about her. There wasn't even a token: "she died off page before the adventure began", because that would have made too much sense. It probably also didn't help that the main story has changed so much, and with it, any semblance of continuity that I was hoping for.

There is a good silver lining in all of this: namely that I can fix it fairly easy once I restart the whole thing. I have a couple of ideas where to take the character and ensure that she plays the part she was destined for (I clearly must have had a plan for her in the first place since I created her).

Next to that issue I found, I came across another one. This one had ambition behind it but, after a long think on it, I can't see a way forward with it in terms of the story that I want to tell with these novellas. The original inspiration was that a certain blue eyed demon merchant was going to be heavily involved with Isabelle’s accident, working in his usual mysterious ways. However...this caused a problem, namely there wouldn't be any resolution to this thread within the three stories. Gabriel was set to appear a couple of times, but in small guest appearances, lest he actually show up the main villains. Ideally, I needed her accident to tie in with the greater story threads so she could find some solace from it all, hence reluctantly, I've chosen to ultimately exorcise Gabriel from the prologue part, allowing him to go back to bring an observer in Isabelle’s story while he does his own thing in the background.

Upshot of this will allow me to get closer to the stand alone nature I wanted this novella series to be while also having some connective tissue to Daemon Soul through certain character appearances (Gabriel, Marie, Serena). It was a bad idea of mine to force people to have to jump to the Daemon Soul series in order to find the conclusion of a fairly important plot point.

I think that's enough waffling from me this week.

Till next time,

Keep on writing!

Peter James Martin

Quick Links

The Strange Tales of Brennan and Riz Volume 1

The Strange Tales of Brennan and Riz Book 1: A Boy and A Rat

The Strange Tales of Brennan and Riz Volume 2

Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Volume 1

Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Fade to Noir

Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Hubble Bubble

Harvey Duckman Presents Volume 13


Wednesday 10 January 2024

#53 That Didn't Go Well + Whats in a Writing Goal?

Happy Blog Day Everyone!

This weeks marks the first full year of the blog, so I decided to thrash the 4th wall for the Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz. I also discuss my writing goals for this year...Well I attempt to!

Let's get started shall we?

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz



Hope no one was expecting anything fancy for an anniversary issue from these two. I was too amused with the idea of a Ask Me Anything going horribly wrong. Didn't quite get the result I wanted but hopefully the thought of me getting bitten by Riz will make up for the lack of quality!

From this point though, onwards and upwards!

What's in a Writing Goal? ... Or What I'm Probably Not Going To Achieve!

So a year has come and gone, and I have to face towards another year of writing. What do I hope to achieve this year? What are my goals? These have been my thoughts the past week.

I could say a lot about what I hope to write this year, all the short stories and full blown novels. I would love to see then all published as well. However, there is a flip side to all this and that's the feeling of when I look back on December 31st and reflect on everything that I didn't accomplish. This is something I've done yearly. Every year I'm consumed by the guilt when I wind up achieving next to nothing. 2023 is no exception as I'd hoped to have had several books on shelves, most notably War of the Fae, carrying on the story from A Boy and A Rat.

That's not to say I'm unhappy with what I did achieve (Stories in all 3 Malarkey's Imaginomnibus collections, story in HDP 13, the 2nd collected volume of Brennan and Riz stories) but I know I could have done more if I pushed myself. Then again, that was part of the issue. Look at what happened a scant couple of months ago with Nanowrimo. Won't repeat myself here, but yeah...Could have gone a lot better.

To this end, I need to have a rethink on the goals I set myself. Yes, it's good to aim high, but if what I want is next to impossible to grasp, then all I'm doing is feeding my depression with more proof that I'm worthless. No, what I need to do is think realistically and not set any hard limits in place. 

For instance, one thing that I'd really like to get done this year is to finally finish the Brennan and Riz Redcar story (I've talked about it before, but long story short, I made a mess of the earlier drafts). Ive pondered about it enough, but I think I can sort out now.

Something else I can sort out? Avalon Tales. No, I've not given up on it yet. There is a story waiting to come out there and I'll tell it. It may mean abandoning the word limit I set myself, or even the Novella style, but I think I can set things straight with it.

Another thing I'd like to do? Write War of the Fae, regardless if it'll ever see print or not. I owe it to the few people who bothered to read A Boy and A Rat.

There's other things I'd like to write of course, more short stories here and there, and Daemon Soul of course. That's where this blog enters the picture as I hope to start producing original short stories for this blog again. Have an idea for some already.

Notice how I've not mentioned publishing in these goals? That's because I think that's where my downfall lies. I was set to self publish Daemon Soul till I started enquiring about costs, an editor alone would sadly bankrupt me. I could forge ahead without one but I reckon my chances of success that way are slim to none. My writing isn't the cleanest and needs checking over, thoroughly.

While those goals may look meager to some, I think, that for ms, they're appropriate. Will I achieve them though? Well, we'll just have to wait and see on that!

Till next time,

Keep on writing!

Peter James Martin

Quick Links

The Strange Tales of Brennan and Riz Volume 1

The Strange Tales of Brennan and Riz Book 1: A Boy and A Rat

The Strange Tales of Brennan and Riz Volume 2

Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Volume 1

Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Fade to Noir

Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Hubble Bubble

Harvey Duckman Presents Volume 13

Wednesday 3 January 2024

#52 New Resolutions + Happy New Year

 Happy Blog Day Everyone!

Let me start by wishing everyone a happy new year! This week will be a short one as I recover from the holiday season and try and pull myself together again. Won't go into things but it's been rough for me. I'm hopeful that things can improve...

Anyways let's get to Brennan and Riz's first comic strip of the New Year!

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz



Yup, there's a mistake in full view there, your eyes aren't deceiving you. I really did mispell resolutions as resoultions...I have no excuse for that! This was a simple idea that proved a little tricky to pull off, and I still don't think I nailed the punch line.

Next week will be #53 and that'll mark an unbroken year of weekly releases...I have no idea on how I did it, but I'm glad I did.

Quick Links

Told you it would be a quick one this week!

The Strange Tales of Brennan and Riz Volume 1

The Strange Tales of Brennan and Riz Book 1: A Boy and A Rat

The Strange Tales of Brennan and Riz Volume 2

Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Volume 1

Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Fade to Noir

Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Hubble Bubble

Harvey Duckman Presents Volume 13