Tuesday, 19 November 2024

#98 Christmas Shopping 1 + Short Diversions: Orphan's War Chapter 2

Happy Blog Day Everyone!

Today, I present Chapter 2 of Orphan's War for your entertainment, like before, all feedback is welcome on it. Also want to talk briefly about my stint on Social Media (topical I know) and to top it all off, we've got the start of a mini-arc of sorts for the Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz! Speaking of...

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz

I said mini-arc above but it's really this issue and next weeks as I wanted to have the freedom to make issue 100 anything I wanted.

Still this is one of Riz’s versions of hell, trapped christmas shopping...with a certain song playing in the background. Feel free to imagine any version of the song that you want in your head while reading. Obviously all rights belong to Mariah (unless that court case says otherwise). I'm just borrowing it for comedic effect.

Heading for Blue(r) Skies

It was around October 2017 when I joined Twitter (I refuse to call it by its new moniker), just before the launch of my first ever published short story collection (really need to get that back online). My task was to promote the book...with zero followers and zero reach. It wasn't an easy task to say the least!


I did build up though, never to celebrity status, who had millions of followers almost but a fair few as years went by. I found fantastic friends, several with whom I've collaborated in the past (most recently with Malarkey's Imaginomnibus Ominous Orbs!). I found the vss365 word prompt which propelled my writing even further, and all other prompts like if.

Nothing good ever lasts.

I won't comment on the doom that befell twitter other than world conditions made it feel like it was an eventuality. Being bought out was just another nail. Gradually, people began to leave, people whose content I'd followed from the beginning.

I should point that I wasn't on any other social media, no Facebook, no tiktoc just plain old twitter as that was all I had time for.

So, while I watched people leaving for pastures new, I stayed and tried my best to carry on, but the message was clear.

To that end, let me welcome you to my Blue Sly account. You can find me under @authorpjm.bsky.social love to see you over there!

So why Blue Sky? Because it had enough of that old twitter charm to let me jump right in. A lot of the community was already over there and though it's early days, it feels like the beginning of my journey on twitter. It's become a space for people to escape to, and there's certainly nothing wrong with that. While the new twitter may call itself the world's town square, it isn't that in practice, as certain people don't listen. What's more, they go out of their way to ruin other people's lives just because. The middle ground (if it ever existed) has collapsed.

Hmm, that got a bit too real than I was wanting (we need Blue skies to dream about after all) so we'll leave it there.

Short Diversions: Orphan's War Chapter 2

Last week I introduced the characters and concept between the world, so we'll just dive in this time round.

(Click here for Chapter 1)

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Chapter 2: Where the Worst is the Best Option


     Drake was awoken by the sound of engines and creaking gears. He bolted out of the tent to see part of the Dome open. Out of this yawning maw came an airship, then another one, and another after that. They were dark grey in colour and advancing slowly as they left the gate. They were so low that Drake could see the machinery that was working hard to give these machines flight, four massive engines in all, two on each side, they pulsed a brilliant blue as they began to drift overhead. The noise had stirred others, who all pointed up at the sight, chattering away to any who would listen. Behind the ships came three sets of three shadows, for they were moving much faster then Drakes morning eyes could pin down. These shadows performed manoeuvres around the ships, zigzagging over the hulls. Focusing his eyes, Drake saw that they were Vector Units, similar in colour to those that flew over head yesterday.

     “Must be training new cannon fodder,” Drake overheard someone say.

     “Yeah, probably going to send them to fight in those border wars they keep having,” Another replied.

     “Not if the terrorists get them first,” The first said back. 

     Drake had learned of the Border Wars, but never paid them much attention. It didn’t seem like a big secret that the borders on the maps were very hard to define, and that the skirmishes were just tat for tat. The global powers craved complete control, but none of them did a great deal to get the control. The terrorists on the other hand, these were little groups that kept damaging the Empire in different ways, each with their own objectives. They were seldom united, even if many shared the goal for a fairer world, after all, that vision was different for most people. Regardless, they were all met with extreme retaliation.

      Drake had kept him and his sister away from incidents, staying away from the towns where the groups took on supplies and away from towns that openly supported them. He had always been told that perspective played a part in many fights, his dad giving him that nugget of information. He sympathised with some of the issues but the war was not for him, he had his own problems to deal with.


     The airships were now fully clear of the Dome, which had begun closing up again. As the final gear went click, the ships engines roared even louder as their speed increased, quickly taking them away. The vector units must have disappeared along side them as all that's left now was clear skies.

     “Why is it always noisy in the mornings?” Ava asked as she poked her head through the tent opening. “Did I miss anything fun?”

     “Don’t you always?” Drake laughed as he walked away. “Will you be alright if I go join the queue? Earlier I stand in line, the faster it will be to get us access to the Domes. The empire might be utter bastards but if they have your medicine, once you’re all better we can care more about our morals.” 

     He had been a little long winded again, which drew Ava’s ire.

     “All you had to say was we’ll stay till I got better! To answer your question though, I’ll be fine, I can get the tent down while you’re dying of boredom,” She smiled. Drake reluctantly left her and went to the front of the office where a hefty line had already formed. To join it, he had to leave the grounds and walk down the road. It was slow moving and when he looked back after ten minutes of waiting, he saw that the line now stretched further back. A little discouraged, he put it out of his mind and looked forward again. He overheard a great deal while standing there, of people’s reasons for making the trip and what excuses they would plead to be allowed access. It stood testament that despite what everyone had heard or were saying about the Empire that they still wanted to be on the inside. People could survive on the outside but it wasn’t an easy existence by any stretch of the imagination. Then there were the reports of control of the towns themselves being usurped, by either gangs or agents of other powers, spreading their influence in their enemies back yard. Drake had been asked by several towns he had passed through to stay with them and help build a future out of the wastes. 

     “Where are you from?” Someone said from behind, a man only a few years Drake's senior.

     “Out east...” Drake replied, trying to keep the conversation short.

     “Oh yeah? What town? I’m from Grey Dawn myself.”

     “Never heard of that place. I’m from a small place near Rise View,” Drake was trying to be as blunt as possible in order to get the guy to move on. This didn’t work.

     “Rise View... Rise View... Rise View? Rise View! I know that place, my sister and her family live out that way. Spent a summer or two there. Do they still get that lovely greenery at this time of year?” The stranger was even more curious it seemed, and had enough confidence to openly ask this stuff.

     “If you really want to know, the whole place was razed when a gang showed up and challenged the gang who controlled the town. They had scavenged Vector Units and took out the whole town before calling it a draw,” Drake said, really trying to get the point across in his mannerisms and words that he didn’t want to talk anymore. This time it did the trick. The guy behind mumbled an apology and went to bother the person behind him, some people just seemed to want to talk to someone as long as it meant not being on their own. Drake didn’t care, at least not at the moment.

     A few hours passed and the sun was high in the sky, though the Orbital Ring was also visible, bringing with it the forecast of an eclipse. These were never long events and while it seemed history regarded proper solar eclipses with a sense of wonder and awe that they clearly deserved, these new versions, where the ring passed in front of the sun, casting a shadow on those under its band, were very occasional. Drake assumed he’d still be standing here when it happened. He’d moved forward but not with speed, and from where he was, he couldn’t see the end of the line now and wondered how long the people before him had actually been there for.

     “There you are!” Ava’s voice had that tone in it the gave away the fact that she’d been sleeping. “You haven’t moved much...”

     “No, I’ve moved loads just, I’m a nice person and let people go ahead of me.”

     “We’re really not going to get in are we,” Ava was still worrying about what they would say, seeing how long the line was only made her worry more.

     “Look, I already told you-“ Drake was cut off by a burst of static from partially hidden speakers in the buildings.

     “Testing... Testing,” A robotic voice droned on. The static was maintained but a more human voice replaced the other one.

     “Good afternoon, thank you for showing interest in applying for visa to enter and be officially recognised by the Atlantis Empire. It is encouraging to see so many want to join and help us move forward. As you know, or may not, but only a set number can be granted a visa a day. We have just filled that quota. Congratulations Joshua Meadows, Dean Rani, Felica Goodman, Rea Demin and Zak Brooke.” 

     Drake saw Ava’s heart sink, confirming her fears. There was always tomorrow yes but would Ava wake up tomorrow. The people in the line dispersed. 

     “I...” Ava started to speak, her voice unusually timid.

     “Ava, go set the tent back up. I’m going to get food,” Drake turned so he his sister could only see his back, and not his tear stricken face. Knowing that arguing against his choice would not be helping matters, Ava nodded, and ran as a wind started to blow sand and dust up, providing Drake with the perfect background to his anger.

      He found himself heading towards the Dome itself, unsure of what he was looking for. What he did find was weathered metal sheets, and impenetrable walls. No signs of doors, hardly any signs that the Domes had been manufactured, whatever technology had created them was above the scientists of all the powers that be. Losing time, Drake did stumble upon something, a door half hidden by sand, the door itself slightly eaten away by erosion. Was this is his way in? He went to touch it when a voice shout out, accompanied by the sound of a bullet pinging off metal. Someone had just fired a warning shot that had narrowly missed him. Drake turned with his hands rising, finding the doorway had been too easy. There was four of them, three aiming rifles at him while the fourth and the closest one to him held a pistol that looked like it had just been used. The man who wielded it was dressed in military garb but it looked more ornamental then the others. He looked to be in his late forties, a smile etched within the lines of experience in his face.

     “Well, so you listened on the first go! Normally you silvers play dumb or deaf...Mind telling me what you’re doing near a disused service hatch?” 

     There must have been something about today that made people just want to start randomly talking to him.

     “It’s obvious isn’t it?” Drake retorted, being called a silver had already got a rise out of him.

     “Your right, it is obvious, and do you know what the punishment is for a silver to illegally enter any Atlantis Empire Dome or military base? I think you may just be clever enough to figure that out,” The guy in charge laughed, waving his pistol near his conniving smile. Drake looked around for any chance of escape but only found the guards guns staring back at him.

     “If you're gonna do it then do it!” Drake said angrily.

     “Now, now, I’m actually on my way to the town, walk with us," The guy motioned for Drake to follow him, and reluctantly, he did.

     “You want a public murder?” Drake asked as he turned to see the Dome falling away as they headed back into the town.

     “I was thinking something else, tell me why do you want to be in there? You know what they’ll do to you in there, how you’ll be treat. A lad like you would be better out here. “

     “I don’t want to be in for me, I’m gonna get my sister the treatment she needs. “

     “Oh your doing it for your sister?” The guys face lit up and Drake knew better then to trust whatever followed. “Well I may be able to help you, if you are willing to listen.”

     “You can help her?”

     “I guarantee it, providing you play your part. You see I’m on the look out for new recruits. For my special Vector Unit team. You've got a fire in you lad that'll serve what I need."

     “You want me to fight for you?”

     “Not for me.... For your sister! The pair of you will be treat a lot better then you would be in the traditional method. You serve me, and as long as you do, your sister is kept safe. Even if you fall in combat," The guy leaned in close, as if becoming cannon fodder was a big secret.

      So if I become a pilot and fight for you, my sister, you’ll treat her and promise she’ll be safe?” Drake was kidding himself that he had to make his mind up, this was the best chance he was going to get, even if died fighting someone else’s wars.

     “I promise that as long as she’s in the hospital she’ll be fine. She will be better before you know it. You owe it to her, if you desperate enough to risk death just getting in,” The guy patted Drake on the back. “So what do you say? Are you going to let your dear sister die out here? Or are you going to suit up and fight under our flag... Come on, what are you waiting for?” 

     He was right there was no choice, there was a catch hidden in there somewhere but he’d come all this way, travelled here for the purpose of helping Ava.

     “I’ll... I’ll do it, I’ll fight your stupid wars. Just make her better... If you don’t...” Drake wanted to sound threatening but it was just laughed away.

      “She’ll be fine, once you through the door and under the artificial sky, she’ll be seen by the best doctors, while you start a new life as one of my Vanguard.” 

     Forcibly, the guy shook Drakes hand.

     “I am Special Lieutenant Howard Tarn, welcome to the Atlantis Empire Special Forces...”


     Melody laid back in the reclined bed, a hospital night gown covering her bruised body. She was passive in appearance, but only because this routine had been beaten into her.

     “She’s clear” The doctor said as he stood up, after her examination. “There was some internal damage but I’ve patched her up. You’ll have to be more careful with what you let her do.” 

     Inside Melody’s mind, she laughed at that remark, they had never let her do anything, everything was forced, hence why after every performance she wound up back here being checked over, some appointments worse then others.

     “Fantastic, how long till she’s fully healed,” Darren said from where he was stood in the corner, smoking a smokeless cigarette.

     “Three days, your assistant made it quite clear that she had more private shows...” The doctor was the same one she had seen for the past two years now, and about fifty appointments in that time. Still, he saw her just as others did, an object.

     “They’ve paid good money for the privilege, speaking of which tomorrow morning will be a nice promo shot at Dome Zeus, we’ll be travelling tonight. I’ll drop you back to your accommodation... You’ll be given two hours free time,” Darren dictated the days events to Melody, and the feeling he gave off that he was being gracious in giving her two hours to herself. She nodded in response, she would have loved to have said more, done more. Being in a hospital room meant there was plenty of tools she could have used on Darren and this Doctor who knew full well what was happening and was complicit.

     These fantasies would remain as such though, she was powerless here. Even in her free time she would be watched, made sure that she wasn’t doing anything to damage herself, she had already tried that. Sje did have something to escape with, to take her mind elsewhere, an act of rebellion that they so far hadn’t caught. The Rebel Broadcasts, made by those fighting against all the powers that be. They listed their exploits knowing that there was a media blackout in effect. To her observers she would be idling to music, one guard who had actually cared for her plight shown her how to access the broadcasts. Sadly the guard was posted else where and Melody never saw her again. Her name was etched in her memory, as one of few who seemed like a nice person, yet sometimes the name seemed distant. Tina... That was it, Melody assured herself, using the name retrieval exercise as a way to provide distance from the conversation around her, about her but not including her.


     “When will you be putting her in the program then? I’m aware my colleagues in that division have found some potential breeding stock.” The doctor asked as he cleaned his glasses.

     “I’ll send her over once I’m happy with the match ups, she’s one of the best we’ve had and I’m not wasting her on some hunches. She needs to be with the best... “ Darren replied. “Now if you’ll excuse us Doctor Redfield, she has to rest now.” Hearing that command Melody allowed herself to rise and followed Darren out of the door, then still under his watchful gaze, she got changed back into her casual clothes, almost a prison like tracksuit complete with serial number. A car ride later she threw herself onto her bed, listening to the guards footsteps in the hall outside. She put her headphones in and stared at the ceiling as she switched over to the Rebel Broadcasts, longing for strength in herself, like they had.

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Well, that's it for this week.

Till next time,

Keep on writing!

Peter James Martin

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Tuesday, 12 November 2024

#97 Way Too Much + Short Diversions: Orphan's War Chapter 1

Happy Blog Day Everyone!

So, normally, this week would be a brand new short story as part of my Short Diversions series. However with all systems go on getting the first draft ready on Daemon Soul: Avalon, I haven't had time to write a brand new short! So, instead, we're going to try something a bit different...

For the next couple of weeks, I'll post the first few chapters of my Vector Unit Regen: Orphan's War story (most commonly just referred to as Orphan's War). If you have any feedback to give me on these, unedited, chapters, I'd love to hear it. 

Also this week, I want to share some quick thoughts on blurb writing, as it's something I'm forever toying with.

But, before we do any of that, let's see what your favourite man and talking rat duo are up to!

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz


My attempts at trying to brighten up the Comic seem to have gone askew this month! Sorry about that folks!

Not much to say about this one, though I love Riz’s puzzled expression there. Really need to sit down and work out the schedule for the next few issues, can I squeeze a mini Arc in before issue 100? Or is that just a mad man's dream? 

Time will tell!


About Blurbs- A Writer's Torment

Blurb writting. Is there another two words that can send such fear down my spine? Well actually, yes, there is but this isn't the time for that!

Writing a blurb is one of the tasks I despise doing, trying to distill a story down to it's base elements, dressed up in a desireable way, is a skill all writers have to wrestle with in one form or another. After all, we have to pitch the work to someone, and I consider an elevator pitch to be a blurb in its purest sense.

I struggle with trying to break down an entire story in such a small space. Take, for example, the following blurb I wrote for Daemon Soul: Awakening as part of a submission process:

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“You are the next Daemon Soul, Terry.”

With Serena’s words, seventeen year old Terry Baker’s world is shattered, and in its place is a world where demons lurk in the shadows.

Now, with everything he knew in free fall. Terry must decide what he wants to do, and what’s worth fighting for. Dealing with events from the past that still scar him, new enemies rise around him, including the Arc Demon known as Death. 

With Serena by his side, he must navigate this new world. One that will see the end of what he knows, and the beginning of something new.

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Does that make you want to read it? For me, I know it's had important parts of the story condensed to what seems like mere after thoughts and at worst misrepresent other parts of the story! 

(Though if you did like it and want to read it, disregard everything in the paragraph above!)

I've tried many times over the years to make a blurb I was happy with, and most of the early ones were very samey (I have none to hand currently) and I always feel I've lost the readers attention a few lines in. At which point that stops being a blurb problem and become an actual story problem isn't completely clear. 

What set me down this path of thought was my attempts to do the same for the next Daemon Soul story, so I could easily explain the geist a lot better than I have been doing.

Check it out:

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"Your world just got a lot more complicated, didn't it kid?"

Cypher may havd handled one threat, but his life certainly hasn't gotten easier.

An encounter with an old friend kick-starts the next fight for his life but Cypher will have to learn that he and Serena aren't the only demon hunters in town.

Avalon has been keeping the country safe from demonic threat by royal decree, and they won't let the Daemon Souls get the way.

Now faced with a difficult choice and his father ramping up his plans, Cypher has to make a decision, that is, if he survives long enough to choose...

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That sound good? Still missing out a lot for my tastes, to say nothing of what I got planned for the ending! Though I guess that part should be kept secret I suppose!

Though with that being said, it also seems that some blurbs come easier than others, like this one for today's feature presentation, Orphan's War:

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The future is desolate.

Those with the means are protected by the Dome.

Those without, those known as 'Silvers' are forced to eke out a living in the wastes.

Drake Vern will do anything to get his sister the help she needs but as a 'Silver', there's little he can do.

Melody Moon appears to lives the life people can only dream of, except no one knows the truth she suffers through.

Their futures lay entwined as they're both thrust into a unending war...

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Only thing missing from that is the fact that there's giant robots in it! Though maybe it's only me that finds that aspect important?

Short Diversions: Orphan's War Chapter 1

Any one who has been around this blog long enough may remember this story from a couple of years ago. Back then I was attempting to upload chapters weekly but that fell through. It has been changed slightly from that release but not massively.

Please enjoy.

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Chapter 1: Two Tales


     The trudge over the wind blasted dunes had seemed long, but it had only been a few hours since Drake and his sister had set out from their makeshift camp. They had been travelling for a few days now, stopping and replenishing their supplies along the way where ever possible. Ahead of them, was their target, the most westerly of the Domes that was the domain of the Atlantis Empire. Inside there was a new life waiting for those who were allowed in. Drake had told his sister the stories that had been passed to him from his parents, who got them from their parents. Inside any of the Domes was a paradise that hadn’t been seen on the Earth in countless ages. Controlled weather systems, heating and conditioned running water, stable and clean energy and most important of all, the best medicine. 

     Ava, Drakes sister, was asleep on her brothers back, the disease that was ravaging her body on the inside taking more of her waking time from her with each passing day. Her health pushed Drake to his limit, one of those good Samaritan doctors who visited the folk who were forced to eke out an existence outside the Domes had offered to tell him what her life expectancy was, to help him get used to the eventuality of her fate, or as he put it ‘Give you the time you need to make her last days the best they can be’. Saying it to Drake's face was not the best move, and the doctor needed to see a doctor. That had been a few weeks ago now, with Drake and Ava leaving the next morning after that incident. Determined to save his sisters life instead of giving up, Drake knew he had to get her to where the medicine was. He couldn’t just watch her fade away like so many had before. Aside from the travel, the biggest obstacle was their status as a ‘Silver’, owning to the eye colour all those born outside the Domes had. While the Domes did accept some ‘Silvers’ it was a highly restrictive process, only those certain to be useful likely to be admitted. It didn’t stop people trying though from wanting the best life possible for their families. 

     The sound of a spluttering engine rose from behind. A rust bucket on wheels was coming up as fast as it could when dealing with the shifting sand. It was a jumble of parts, trying to mimic what people had seen in old historic images as a motorbike, the best approximation you can get for these parts. The rider looked older then Drake, his face hidden by a dented helmet and a scarf that was failing to keep the mouth clear. The bike slowed down as it pulled alongside the brother and sister.

     “You’re not going to sell her are you?” The rider said, his voice a mix of surprise and judgment, clearly this wasn’t the first time he’d seen something like this.

     “Why the hell would I sell my sister!” Drake snapped back. “What sick people do you deal with?”

     “Hey calm down!” The rider reached inside his dirt caked jacket and pulled out a metal badge, still shining in places. “It’s my job to ask questions like that.” The rider belonged to a group known as the Sheriffs, they tried to keep some level of order in the outside, but they were a rag tag organisation who took their name from history. Drake felt uneasy, no two Sheriffs were the same, each having their own moral compass and their own views on how to keep the peace.

     “So I’m guessing if you’re not selling her then, you’re trying to take her to Entry Point?” 

     “Entry Point? I’m taking her into the Dome,” Drake replied, walking forward again.

     “Wait! You have to go through Entry Point to get to the Dome! You can’t just waltz in there!” The rider got level again, while fighting to stop his bike sinking. “Look there’s the town of Entry Point in ‘front’ of the Dome.” He pointed to the ramshackle buildings, over a dozen of them, like a blemish on a scenic view. 

     “Okay, so I go through that place to get to the Dome, got it.” 

     This time, instead of letting Drake go again, the rider reached out and grabbed his arm.

     “You idiot! You have to go through the proper channels, there’s an office in town that has the power to grant you access to the Dome, they are the ones you have to speak to. I warn you though, there’s a wait, lots of young people like you have the exact same idea.” 

     “I’ll take my chances thanks,” Drake pulled his arm free. “I’m getting in there, no matter what.” 

     “Parents dead I take it,” The rider bluntly observed. “Just because you got tragic circumstances isn’t going to make it any easier for you, there’s a lot of orphans out here.”

     “A nineteen year old carrying a thirteen year old on his back and you wonder if my parents are still around. Yeah they’re dead, and I’m not letting the same time happen to her, no matter who I have to go through.”

     “Carry on like that and you’ll wind up in trouble,” The rider said quietly. In the distance, three specks were getting increasingly larger, exceptionally fast. Drake spotted them and felt the tension rise in his body, then the rider saw them.

     “Here come the big boys,” He said with a pause, as three massive humanoid machines blasted through the sand, whipping it up and blowing it out of the way. They were coated black aside from specks of colour on the shoulders, and each carrying oversized versions of normal weapons. These were Vector Units, the weapon of choice for the powers that be. The original ones were found and dissected, giving rise to newer models, and caused a push to reap what few resources the planet had left to give up. Drake had only seen them from afar before, staying out of their way as much as possible. Everyone knew what they meant when they showed up, death was close.


     The Vector Units flew overheard, not even pausing to consider the people underneath. The noise however caused Ava to stir.

     “What was that?” She asked.

     “Just some flying tin cans...You feeling better?” Drake asked as he helped Ava down. The Rider took a good long look at her, and he tutted under his breath. “No one asked your opinion” Drake glared.

     “Good luck...You’re going to need it. See you around,” The rider then sped off towards the town, leaving Ava confused.

     “Who was that?”

     “No one, just a Sheriff. If you can walk, then we should get going again.”

     Truth be told, Drake’s body was close to rebelling against him, but it didn’t matter. He had to get his sister the help she needed, and he couldn’t do that face down on the floor.

     “Right!” Ava started moving, though not quickly at first, her legs weren’t moving as she wanted. Drake shown more patience with her though and purposely walked slower so they were still side by side. The two of them walked slower then if it had just been Drake, with Ava having a limp and the occasional moment of weakness. She pushed away any attempt at aid, wanting to keep going. 


     Through out all of this, the town ahead got larger and larger. The buildings were all constructed of scavenged materials and no look matched individually, but if you pulled back and looked at the town as a whole, everything came together. They were close enough now to see streamers hanging between the buildings and a happy atmosphere was carried on the breeze. Some celebration must have been going on.

     Now within a whisker of the town, the ambient noise gave way to music, at first just the tune could be made, a pleasurable, and reliable, set of beats pounding away. Ava heard the female voice at the heart of the song and her face lit up.

     “They’re playing Melody Moon!” She gasped, and picked up her pace, entering within range of the shadows of the buildings in the setting sun as lights began to illuminate the skeletal and bare designs of the town. Drake had used the music of Melody Moon as a way to take his sisters mind of things, figuring it was better to give her something to focus on other then the passing of their parents and her own mortality. He found the musicians output to be too cheesy, the lyrics all flowery and dripping with unbridled optimism. 

     As long as it made her happy though. Drake thought to himself as he followed Ava into the heart of the town, an ornate fountain that stuck out like a sore thumb against the forced ascetic of its surroundings. The motif that decorated the structure though told of its origins, a gift from the seemingly benevolent Empire. The Dome loomed large over the tops of the buildings, but it’s opaque glass hid the contents and the citizens away from the prying eyes of those who had to live outside. People came to trade with those outside but the relationship was always one sided. Something else caught Drake’s eye, and with it another shudder, two Vector Units stood at the end of the long street, no doubt guarding the entrance to the Dome, but also acting like beacons, showing the might of the Empire and enticing those who would gladly lay their life down of it.

     “Come on Drake!” Ava tugged at her brothers arm, dragging him towards another street that crossed at the fountain, the jovial festivities of the town had infected her, aiding her in down playing her illness for now, she didn’t know what the celebrations were or what they stood for but it didn’t matter. It meant she could dance and listen to music, so she was happy, this moment blocking out all the more recent ones. This was all Drake could ask for, even more so if he could just watch from the side lines. This wasn’t his scene but it was perfect for her. While she was having the time of her life, he went and made enquiries about his goal, getting him and Ava inside the Dome.

     “Sorry son, the office is closed today, on account of the holiday,” The bar keeper said as he served more customers. Drake had found him next to a public space in a temporary bar, selling drinks from a tent.

     “What holiday? Too early for harvest ones, or any that have been rediscovered,” Drake said, wondering what the purpose of all this was.

    “It marks the date many years ago that the Empire came into being, as a response to the threat from the other nations.” 

     “You would celebrate that even though you’re out here?” It seemed like it would be one that would be inside only, given it meant little to those outside.

     “The Empire is good to us here, they’re going to start helping us revamp this town, get rid of all these remnants and build proper towns, like what they have in the Domes. At least that’s what they say. You’d do well to note down the date, especially if you want to get in there. The office is open for a little while in the morning, but you’d be better off camping outside the doors, a lot of people want to get in.” 

     “You’re not the first to tell me that today...Where is the office though.”

     “Go back to the fountain and head down the street to the right. Go all the way down to the end of the street and it’s the last turn left. Good luck kid.” 


     Drake left the tent and caught up with Ava, who was trying now to hide signs of fatigue, collapsing in her brother's arms.

     “I guess I should have watched my step better!” She joked, weakly.

     “You’re overdoing it.” 

     “No, plus I haven’t heard this song! I got to dance to it, it’s some kind of law...I think.” 

     Her smile was often enough to melt hearts in all the towns they had passed through previously, though it still didn’t bring much help.

     “Come on, I think you need to rest again, I want to set up camp near the office we need.” 

     “Will they let us in? They won’t be interested in me,” Ava said, her usually optimistic voice disappearing under the wave of pessimism.

     “They’re going to let us in, it won’t be worth it for them otherwise. Plus we’ve got a secret weapon, your smile, no one can resist that!” Drake said, just as it was uncharacteristic for Ava to mope or despair, so was it him to smile or joke. Ava bought out this side in him. The pair, having reassured each other for now, set off and pitched a tent right near the office building, which was much better maintained then the others in the town, having a uniform design.  

     To their surprise, there were already dozens of tents pitched out along the edges and nearby. It took them ten minutes to find a place of their own.

     “There’s a lot of people here,” Ava said, looking surprised.

     “It doesn’t matter, we’re the ones getting in,” Drake said, he was beginning to feel a little doubt, his bluster failing with his tiredness. Sleep was what they both needed now.


     While they settled down for the night, just on the other side of the reinforced Dome wall, another party was in full swing, this one a lot grander, with guests wearing the finest clothes, enjoying the best drinks. All except one was having a good time, and she was sitting overlooking the edge of the balcony, onto the lush gardens below. The night sky was visible through the glass ceilings, and with it, the monolithic structure, the Orbital Ring. The vast relic of a bygone space age encompassing the Earth, it’s purpose lost, any means to visit it long vanished. To the woman sitting there, the ring was as cold and distant as she herself felt. She was dressed in brilliant pinks, an outfit made to order, expensive but designed to last only a single wear. She had been living this life since she was plucked from the outside as a child, her parents more than willing to sign her over to a handler. She often thought about fleeing the gilded cage they had placed her in but knew from what happened to one of the other children how bad it worked out. Nonetheless, she was the only survivor from that intake, being shown their broken bodies as a warning to avoid their mistakes. The last of her friends, her sisters, had only died last year, having been demoted to a general’s plaything after an escape attempt. Melody felt herself wanting to cry but her conditioning made it hard, then someone spoke up.

     “Melody, please come back and join the party, its about time for us to hear your lovely voice...” 

     The man who wanted her to return was her newest handler, who took over from her predecessor when she came of age, a night she tried so hard to forget. His voice though aroused those memories, dragging them up. His name was Darren Deacon, and presented himself to others as the very model of efficiency and skill. Scratch that surface and he was no better then all the others who wanted her. Melody wanted to run away but couldn’t, having no choice but to follow Darren. As they entered the room, all the male eyes fell on her with that gaze of lust, while the women looked on in a mix of envy and condescension, they knew that what she had wouldn’t last long, and was replaceable, while they would keep their power.

     “Now ladies and gentlemen, Miss Melody Moon will now perform privately for your entertainment, and afterwards, there may be time for personal performances...”Darren announced with the skill of a ringmaster. Melody’s skin crawled with each word, as her hopelessness rose and numbed her. With tears in her eyes she started singing as the small crowd moved in...

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Well, that's chapter 1 done! If you have any feedback, don't hesitate to let me know.

That's all for this week,

Till next time...

Keep on writing!

Peter James Martin

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Tuesday, 5 November 2024

#96 No Words + Some Ominous Orbs!

Happy Blog Day Everyone!

Today is a double threat! Not only do I have to talk about my writing for October (exciting I know) but we have a brand new anthology to celebrate!

Oh, and as always, a new Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz to kick things off!

The Comic Tales of Brennan and Riz


This one, may have become a new favourite. I wish I could say the no words thing happened by design, that I wished to push the boundaries of the visual medium that comics are, buuuut...I would be lying my bum off. Truth is that this comic kind of came out by complete accident. I had a different strip in mind at first but gave up on it when it became clear that it wasn't working. So about ten minutes before I was supposed to start drawing, I had to brainstorm a new idea and the image of Riz being stuck is pretty funny. 

Originally, Riz was supposed to be reflecting on the state of his life, ultimately building up to the reveal of his precarious position. Brennan was also supposed to appear, being amused and unhelpful. However before the pencils were done, before I had worked out the lettering, I looked at what I'd already done and realised that it worked far better without any text. So that's the way it stayed. Quite effective don't you think!

Only 3 to go now till the big 100!

October Review

So, this should be quick as I only worked on two stories in October, both of them for this blog!

Short Diversions: The Woods (part 1 and part 2)

Short Diversions: Little Girls and Dead Things (part 1 and part 2)

Both were a lot longer than anything I've written for this blog so far, and they could have been far longer. It might have been better if I just picked one and focused that in 4 parts over the month, instead of leaving that rushed feeling. Not much else to say about them that I didn't already say in their corresponding blogs! 

What I'm currently writing however is Daemon Soul Avalon, and I'm doing pretty okay at the moment, should be finished chapter 7 soon, and then only about 23 to go...probably not the best way to think about it! 

May have to share a preview at some point as the next few chapters are going to be interesting! Several familiar faces to readers of this blog have already appeared...in fact most of them!

Let's see how much I get done by months end shall we?

...on saying that though a new story idea has sadly forced its way into my head and is threatening to derail my writing plans, so, there is that.

Some Ominous Orbs!

That's right folks, another brand new Malarkey's Imaginomnibus has dropped, featuring a brand new Brennan and Riz short nestled in its pages. There's better writers and stories in there than that argumentative pair, of course, but nice all the same!

The theme is pretty much in the anthologies title, Ominous Orbs. Once I settled in on doing a Brennan and Riz story (why wouldn't I? The rights had landed back in my lap afterall) the subject was more or less obvious: Will'O the Wisp. These, if you're not familiar, are known as strange orbs of colourful and enticing light. They're known to lurk in woodlands or marshlands  wanting to lure the unsuspecting traveller to their doom. Their depictions in folklore all around the world are as varied as their names and most cultures seem to have something like them.

Now, the question came to how to approach the story, what part would the Wisps play, and how many times would Brennan and Riz argue? Turns out quite a lot!

For the story, I decided to cast the wisps as "good guys", so to speak. Treating them very similarly to how I did Brownies in the third Brennan and Riz short story. There the creature was something of value, wanted by the rich. The plot crystallised around this and I started writing, going with a in-action start to proceedings.

It wasn't long though before my feelings changed and I knew I needed more. In a marked change from how I normally handle things, I didn't just delete everything. Instead I only ditched the opening, starting with Brennan and Riz’s first encounter with the Wisp, except this time, I gave the Wisp a voice. Ro was a contradiction. He was both fun and hard to write for, and even now, I question my approach with him. His motivations though, came from the song that I decided to integrate more...that being Jerry Lewis's Great Balls of Fire. Leaning into the song more allowed me to give a reason to why Ro sought out these two and to set up the conflicts resolution.

Speaking of that, the bad guy, Reginald, was a hoot, he may be one note villain (to say nothing about his henchmen!) but he was so fun to write and honestly, sometimes  that's all a story like this needs, and it allowed Brennan to get a couple of funny lines in.

I was torn on what to do with them, as I didn't want to kill them (not sure Brennan would have allowed that) but at the same time, any other punishment would have felt hollow. So I let the Wisps deal with them! Not sure which punishment would be worse mind!

All in all, a fun little story and the first published Brennan and Riz story since last year. A return to form for the pair? I'll let you be the judge of that!

That's all for this week, till next time...

Keep on writing!

Peter James Martin

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